After the 1,000 year war ended, on a royal family vacation they find out that a new enemy awakens. But little do they know that that one enemy becomes two.
The story is interesting! With some improvements, like the chapters are too short, make them longer.
And, you should add more paragraphs, there's no space so it's a little hard to keep up with the conversations.
Anyways, keep it up Author![img=recommend]
3 years ago
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leoreview1
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The story is interesting! With some improvements, like the chapters are too short, make them longer. And, you should add more paragraphs, there's no space so it's a little hard to keep up with the conversations. Anyways, keep it up Author![img=recommend]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.