The Legacy of the cursed Family
The soft crunch of the trees on the ground made her wistful. They were a faded, shredded tapestry of autumn, she thought as she remembered the crisp golden hues and the vibrant oranges that had blanketed the forest floor the last time, she had visited it. Wait, the last time she visited?
She suddenly realizes where she was, it was that old bungalow! As she realizes the truth, the beautiful clouds turn into violent storm clouds. The tress dancing with the breeze started shouting and screaming at her. Then she saw someone with shiny silver eyes was staring her from the entrance of the balcony.
Salvadora was horrified, she couldn’t move. Suddenly, Rebekah’s silver eyes turned red and blood started to come out of her eyes! But the next thing that happened was even worse, blood started to pool out of Salvadora's eyes too! Her whole face was covered in blood. “Babe, do what’s right, SAVE THE HUMANITY IN YOU!”
The next thing that she knew, she hanged herself!
Hey guys! Hope you all like it and I'll be posting one chapter daily!!!😊 Plz review it and tell me my dark spots so that I can improve. After all, I'm just 13, I might need some guidance. Trust me, it actually works.😊
The story is brilliant!!! This is so underrated! The plots and characters are literally the best and interesting. The story and the world it is in is so beautifully created, I feel like I'm one of the characters too. It is created in such a unique way....I'm really impressed. I got shocked when I read that she's just 13! At that age, I could barely write an essay! I would really recommend you to read it.
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I feel like I'm a character in this book. The characters are so beautifully designed and the idea of the story is really good. The concept and the cover is all so fantastic. I've been searching for a novel like this, and I found this. I really love this and would 100% recommend this to read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins]
Amazing!!❤️ I've read the prologue and I can't wait to read what's next. The characters and everything is so beautiful designed and the idea is so fantastic! You've done a really good job gor a 13 year old.
'The legacy of cursed family' I just read synopsis, i can't imagine story but characters are interesting i would like to read whole novel. U done great job.
Definitely not your average story. For someone aged 13, this is excellent. The writing quality is great, and the story does not disappoint. This story has potential, and I hope that it reaches greater heights.
Great grammar, nice plot, Intresting characters. I think the author invested a lot and really pours out a good read for readers. There isn't much story which can give you the feel of reading a thriller like this one. What more did u want? Just read it man!
This book is just amazing! The cover and the blurb depict the story very well, and to be honest, I fell in love with the latter. The language used is simple and understandable, but the whole flow of ideas and plotlines is just superb. It really felt like I was watching a horror movie, and I felt like I was a part of the story. I would recommend this to readers who are able to handle horror (at least a little). It definitely goes into my list of top-read books. Keep going, Author! You're doing a great job!
Now this is something from a 13 year old girl. 👏 UWU....awesome! Descriptions were very vivid and the narrations were very detailed. Just reading the synopsis was very enthralling as a variety of words were munched by my mouth as I read them. Spectacular! You know your style and as you matures, well that will be something to look forward to. Keep it up! I wished I have the passion and talent when I was in that age. Kudos for a job well done.
The idea of this novel is really great . The name of the characters are beautiful and are designed beautifully. I love this novel . The author's idea of thinking is really great. I Enjoyed this novel so😀😀😀😀
For a 13-year-old author, this is exceptional quality work. Destined to be a world-renowned author I guess. This book, is amazing, from the writing to the plot. from the setting of the story to the titles of each chapter, this is professional work. Loved it. Recommend it.
This story is just perfect, amazing, breathtaking- I can assure you all that you will get hooked for every chapter in this story. The world building, the twist, the characters are just the best!
I'm quite impressed, honestly. This is just the perfect thriller. Highly recommended. The synopsis drew me in at a first glance. Keep up the good work👌
I for one, I don't like anything horror but after going through a few chapters, I am in no doubt in love with this novel. and I will recommend to anyone who loves good novels. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]