The game of revenge

Really inspiring and interesting..I think it'll be the most rated novel in the future. Love Thomas character seems bit funny. Rejected piece hahaha.

The best novel to read😍The concept of science fiction is interesting. What will happened to the Rocky? Seema's character seems so amazing. What will Anna do with Rocky?

Rocky will be hero for this world. Love the way you relate future life with present with the appropriate conditions. Whose your editor? Please update new chapters.

I can predict that upcoming chapters will br interesting. I'm feared that upcoming generation will not become victim if it. 😅😅😅.. So, be careful while reading it.

The mixture of Sci-fi, reincarnation and time travelling is superb! I feel overwhelmed by the beginning but I immediately got hooked by the story. It's one of the most interesting mixtures I've read here. Great job author~

It's a good story with an interesting plotline. The story development was pace rather slowly, but it suits the plot well. Every scene was unfolding with a good description, and it was well detailed. There were just a few grammatical errors, such as the misuse of pronouns. It's minimal, and I think that this story would develop better.

Amazing experience with this great novel. Love Ai's expression and feelings. Even after not seeing her, I can feel for her. Hates for Ju. The Prime Minister could make the situation more better.

The storyline and the plot is written really well. It's hard executing a good time travel story and plus it has reincarnation? You're really amazing and creative for pulling something hard. You're hard work in writing the story pays off for being amazing, I'd totally recommend this to some of my friends.

The story initially doesn't balance it's ideas well in the beginning and it did hurt the pacing but it eventually found its groove and I pretty much enjoyed it. Hopefully the story remains consistent but I like what I see so far.

Rocky's story is interesting to discover and each of his thoughts has a genuine feeling of reality behind it. The writing can be a bit better, but the plot and storyline are engaging. Every character is intriguing and the author has done a great job in showing their personality through well-written dialogues. Overall, nice job!

You have a great idea for the story! I like the mixture of time travel, reincarnation, and all the science-fiction aspects of your story. The plot is intriguing and your characters are nicely created. The thing that bothers me is the way you construct dialogues, it shows the imperfection of the author's workshop, so there is a place for improvement.

Honest opinion, this story is an open book. The opening chapters don’t seem to flow very well, especially with the dialogues swapping from “ to : every so often. The tenses also become mixed up, and too many characters are show at once, creating confusion. Otherwise, the plot of the novel is being unpacked fast and I like how the author has gone on to address the sci-if genre. It’s good if you ignore the punctuation and style errors.

It's really cool, you have a fertile imagination, I feel like I'm watching a movie in the cinema. I really like that you made Rocky remember his life. I feel warm when he talks about his mother and sister

Interesting story. First off, I'd like to say that I like all the large paragrpahs you have. Never a detail missed. There are a lot of competing ideas, and as a writer who loves mixing different medias into his books, I really enjoyed that part. Good job so far!