The game of revenge

The game of revenge

Sci-fi100 Chapters276.3K Views
Author: Maryam_Zahoor
4.81
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"I claim that no one can win the game of revenge; your every step in this game takes you close to the fire tub, and your heart stops beating before time."



Have you heard about transmigration? Most probably you have, but how dreadful if incomplete transmigration happens!



The future red rays reconverted 18 years old boy into a newly born baby. Unfortunately, his right hand remained unconverted. He gained some secret superpowers through that rays, including mind-reading and invisibility (only with drink lies underground coal fire).



He was considered abnormal in the whole world due to his large-sized hand. The future scientist wanted to snatch his powers and attack the whole world. In that intention, he made conspiracies with Aliens.



The story revolves around the hearts which burn with the revenge fire that never exhausted and got satisfaction and make people blood seekers of the whole world.

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Urdu_Stories_World
Urdu_Stories_World

Really inspiring and interesting..I think it'll be the most rated novel in the future. Love Thomas character seems bit funny. Rejected piece hahaha.

3 years ago
5
Webnovelgreatfan
Webnovelgreatfan

The best novel to read😍The concept of science fiction is interesting. What will happened to the Rocky? Seema's character seems so amazing. What will Anna do with Rocky?

3 years ago
5
Bloodyman
Bloodyman

Rocky will be hero for this world. Love the way you relate future life with present with the appropriate conditions. Whose your editor? Please update new chapters.

3 years ago
4
Muhammad_Tahir_8503
Muhammad_Tahir_8503

I can predict that upcoming chapters will br interesting. I'm feared that upcoming generation will not become victim if it. 😅😅😅.. So, be careful while reading it.

3 years ago
3
Blackpaint
Blackpaint

The mixture of Sci-fi, reincarnation and time travelling is superb! I feel overwhelmed by the beginning but I immediately got hooked by the story. It's one of the most interesting mixtures I've read here. Great job author~

3 years ago
1
Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_Arcadian

It's a good story with an interesting plotline. The story development was pace rather slowly, but it suits the plot well. Every scene was unfolding with a good description, and it was well detailed. There were just a few grammatical errors, such as the misuse of pronouns. It's minimal, and I think that this story would develop better.

3 years ago
1
Thomas_scientist
Thomas_scientist

Amazing experience with this great novel. Love Ai's expression and feelings. Even after not seeing her, I can feel for her. Hates for Ju. The Prime Minister could make the situation more better.

3 years ago
1
SabergKeys
SabergKeys

The storyline and the plot is written really well. It's hard executing a good time travel story and plus it has reincarnation? You're really amazing and creative for pulling something hard. You're hard work in writing the story pays off for being amazing, I'd totally recommend this to some of my friends.

3 years ago
1
Ozymandias007i
Ozymandias007i

The story initially doesn't balance it's ideas well in the beginning and it did hurt the pacing but it eventually found its groove and I pretty much enjoyed it. Hopefully the story remains consistent but I like what I see so far.

3 years ago
1
Happy_Person_8656
Happy_Person_8656

Rocky's story is interesting to discover and each of his thoughts has a genuine feeling of reality behind it. The writing can be a bit better, but the plot and storyline are engaging. Every character is intriguing and the author has done a great job in showing their personality through well-written dialogues. Overall, nice job!

3 years ago
1
Jo_J
Jo_J

You have a great idea for the story! I like the mixture of time travel, reincarnation, and all the science-fiction aspects of your story. The plot is intriguing and your characters are nicely created. The thing that bothers me is the way you construct dialogues, it shows the imperfection of the author's workshop, so there is a place for improvement.

3 years ago
1
Starling_
Starling_

Honest opinion, this story is an open book. The opening chapters don’t seem to flow very well, especially with the dialogues swapping from “ to : every so often. The tenses also become mixed up, and too many characters are show at once, creating confusion. Otherwise, the plot of the novel is being unpacked fast and I like how the author has gone on to address the sci-if genre. It’s good if you ignore the punctuation and style errors.

3 years ago
1
Noooona
Noooona

It's really cool, you have a fertile imagination, I feel like I'm watching a movie in the cinema. I really like that you made Rocky remember his life. I feel warm when he talks about his mother and sister

3 years ago
1
KingAraragi
KingAraragi

Interesting story. First off, I'd like to say that I like all the large paragrpahs you have. Never a detail missed. There are a lot of competing ideas, and as a writer who loves mixing different medias into his books, I really enjoyed that part. Good job so far!

3 years ago
1
Jia_K
Jia_K

Ten chapters in and this story is already SO good. I really want to read further. Keep it up! I love the characters and the world. Poor rocky :(

3 years ago
1