Bracer Phoenix
"There will be carnage, massacres hundreds of thousands will be dead entire species will be wiped out"
"But I'm just a kid!"
"Children would give their lives to get such an opportunity"
"Whether you like it or not, the lives of every living creature on this planet is now in your hands".
Atlantis is real?! That was my reaction too! I remember I was at the museum- there was this creature behind me and it was SCARY. I am taken to a secluded island, an Atlantean training camp. Fitting into my cabin and getting beaten up in cabin games? That was sort of normal for me until well- something happens. I'm given a quest by the Holy Flame Of Atlantis, to do something no Atlantean has done before. To venture in the scariest parts of the ocean for a reason I did not know. It's like never before, I might have stumbled onto one of the darkest secrets the world has ever seen.
"BAD THINGS ARE HAPPENING, NOBODY CAN EXPLAIN THEM- IT WILL BE A LONG NIGHT BEFORE THE DAWN AND YOU NEED TO BE READY", that's what she told me.
I have an impossible task but I have my friends
Can I make the impossible possible.
Maybe?
“Listen to me”, the boy said, “we need to get you out of here- quick. My team is outside, we need to get you as far as possible”.
I stood unmoving, the boy looked at me pleadingly, “Bracer we need to go- we’re under attack”.
That’s when the washroom blasted.
I think this is an amazing novel considering it is just the rough version. The transition is very good and new scenes are interesting! Well done
This was a really amazing book! The synopsis was really interesting. I really loved the way the characters were developed and the world background was really interesting. The amount of hard work put into writing this book is clearly visible! Highly recommended read and good job Author! [img=recommend][img=fp]
Loved every details! This is great, to be honest I'm reading right now and just couldn't stop dropping this comment right now. I'm speechless, I feel like I'm jumping from another world as the author's way to deliver the words is just amazing. The more I read the lovelier it seems to me. Every details made me curious, I highly recommend this to everyone!
A really really amazing book!! Loved every single thing of the book!! You are a grate author!! YOU HAVE SIMPLY DONE A REMARAKABLE JOB WRITING THIS BOOK!! And all the effort you have put in writing the book is clearly visible!!! LOVED IT!!
I am hooked from the very first chapter. The description, the characters and the emotions simply render me speechless. Definitely worth reading all day. Great plot. All the best, keep writing.
Hi, I just want to say that You have a great talent for writing a story. this story is good. I like the plot of this story as well as the characters. Though, the way you written the story is kinda messy. I'm not really a good writer, so I'm not a hundred percent sure how to write professionally but I think you should put some space between dialogue and the other part of the story just to make it easy for the readers to read. but all in all, I love the story. You're a great Author and this story deserves a lot of readers too. keep safe! 😊
This is just amazing! Right from the first chapter it is so interesting. While I was reading the first chapters, I just couldn't stop. Characters, emotions, conversations, everything is perfect well written here.
I think the book has an amazing story, while the way it is displayed can be improved I still believe it's an amazing story and deserves attention
The Author's wide range of vocabulary and the way the events were described were very imaginable, a reason why more readers should come across this book. Definitely a work of art. Rooting for the continuous great work, Author!
I'm only on the first few chapters but the telling of the plot through various points in time keeps the mystery alive! It's definitely worth the read if you're looking for engaging content <3
I'm only on the first few chapters but the telling of the plot through various points in time keeps the mystery alive! It's definitely worth the read if you're looking for engaging content <3
Very well done author! The plot is very captivating especially the characters and their interaction and the way they are portrayed! Amazing piece of work and I look forward to reading more!
I am hooked from the very first chapter. The description, the characters and the emotions simply render me speechless. Definitely worth reading all day. Great plot. All the best, keep writing.
I mean this book is just so wholesome an beautiful, some work on it is required surely. But still man great job, really pround of the effort that has been put in
The story has potential and honestly intrigued with the synopsis once I've read it. Recommendable book! Looking forward to more, Author. Keep it up!