Not absolutely terrible but this story reads like a how a 4 year old would retell a story to you. No substance and no stops just a ton of stuff happening back to back.
3 years ago
12
Sora_Matsukaze
Well... This story leaves a lot to be desired, the rapid character development and illogical things happening. That's why I consider it a waste of time to read this story, but I respect those who like it.
See you later~.
3 years ago
9
Scientistx
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same complains witu sora matsuzake
3 years ago
2
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i like this my good sir or mam I'm trying to write also but its really hard so I be positive and keep pushing man you got this
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3 years ago
1
ItIswhatItIs
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Not absolutely terrible but this story reads like a how a 4 year old would retell a story to you. No substance and no stops just a ton of stuff happening back to back.
Well... This story leaves a lot to be desired, the rapid character development and illogical things happening. That's why I consider it a waste of time to read this story, but I respect those who like it. See you later~.
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i like this my good sir or mam I'm trying to write also but its really hard so I be positive and keep pushing man you got this yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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