Micheal Hale

Not absolutely terrible but this story reads like a how a 4 year old would retell a story to you. No substance and no stops just a ton of stuff happening back to back.

Well... This story leaves a lot to be desired, the rapid character development and illogical things happening. That's why I consider it a waste of time to read this story, but I respect those who like it. See you later~.

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История хорошая.но повествование полное гавго.такое ащющение как будто читаешь маленький пересказ фанфика.а не сам фанфик.диалогов нихрена нет.хотя диалоги это суть истории.надеелся что нашол хороший фанфик про волчонка.а нашол калл.опять.

i like this my good sir or mam I'm trying to write also but its really hard so I be positive and keep pushing man you got this yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy