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By accidentally destroying a ghoul, he achieves a system, which gives him the abilities of a Hunter. But his timing wasn't really good...
Even before a week passes by, they step into the event, "The Witch Hunt," giving them an opportunity to become an Immortal before they are doomed.
Every user of the 8 different systems are doomed to die in 30 years, if they haven't reached "Immortality."
Forced and addicted to kill and gain power, Danny and the vast number of players hidden from the society, thrive to hide behind the Veil, solve the unsolvable mysteries and face the world only visible to their eyes.
• Fact
- 7 chapters weekly ( May differ from ps ranking )
- The story focuses on a lot of characters ;)
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A NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR!
I hope to release chapters daily with around 1.1k - 1.5k words each.
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I was really Hooked In The Novel when I started Reading it 🙃 Well I was lazing Around But The Hard-work of the Author made Me write A review Immediately😊 Plot Is really Nice💕 Character Design Is Great💓 Scenes R well Depicted💞I Loved the Story Development😊 World Background Is Perfecto💟 Writing Quality Is Best💕 5 stars To This Gem💫 Creation Is Hard So Imma Cheer U Up😍 Well Done Din!💖 Keep It Up N Best Of luck Buddy...!!❣
wow... what a thrill this book is! So much action, that I sometimes felt like I was going to have a heart attack from the exitement! Well done author, tou truly know how to engage your readers and keep them at the edge of their seats!
A great opening chapter. I'm really hooked with the chapter one. So awesome and flawless. I want more of these marvelous chapters. Guys, give it a read !!!!
This book is nice, i hope i could have the opportunity again to read a chapter, very much intriguing, great work author, keep on fighting you got this and you will succeed.
I won’t go too deep into details as they aren’t that many chapters to make a decisive review as of now. If you’re wondering if you should give this a try then the answer is yes. The first chapters are a bit rocky but that’s common for new books so don’t let that stop you from reading further. The writing is also good. A nice flow and very few minor errors that are almost negligible. Updating is daily so not much to add on this. Characters thus far have personalities that set them apart from each other. You won’t feel like every character is plain and or bland. World Development: Still too early but the potential if this world is good if executed properly
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 19. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: The writing is solid with only some few minor mistakes. It's easy to read and understand what is happening. Story Development: Pacing is the major problem I have with this. The scenes don't have enough time to settle, things happen too fast. Character Design: There is some good groundwork for character development, but because of the quick pacing, suffer the characters under it and don't feel like they have enough time to establish or grow from what is established. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Like the characters suffers the world from the speed the story has. I cannot convey its rules to me without confusing me with the sudden introduction of them. Summary: There are a lot of interesting concepts in this story. The world seems interesting at first glance, but it rushes to fast around me so that I cannot immerse myself in it. That is perhaps more a problem of me and not of the writer.
Ok, so I have binge read the entire and current ten chapters. It is really well written and the action scenes are really fun and exciting to read. I almost feel like I am there in person. Aside from that, the character development has been really good as has the overall plot devolvement and the introduction of core mechanics, in this case, is a system, Overall well-done author and keep up the good work!
I just took out this book when I was bored, and immediately I got hooked to this story. The author might be new, but he knows how to write a good plot. There are just seven chapters so far, and I am looking forward to reading more of this story. Good luck to the author 🙂
The writing style is quite impressive as well as the way the author represents his point of view that is just on some another league good luck author you have that dignity to make this book work out very very well[img=recommend]
Excellent writing style. Characters and scenes are well-depicted and introduced. Interesting plot. This novel has potential. I gotta say that the author put so much effort into writing this. All the best, author-nim!
Interesting story... Came across the synopsis and found it hooking. Chapters are very well written so far. I found them captivating. Will buckle up myself for a Great journey with Danny Dorne! [img=recommend]
Cool book ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
The book has easy language, interesting plot and a good pace of development of story. i love how the author is slowly making the world background. a bit of grammar mistakes that did not disturb the flow of story.
I've just finished the prologue but I'm already excited for the rest. It's a good beginning. Gotta update when I read more [img=recommend][img=recommend]