The Shadow monarch in Marvel (Solo Leveling x Marvel)

Mc is just interested in collecting women. The idea is good but poorly executed and some stuff seems extremely forced but it is a good ream to kill some time. ........... ....... ....... ..... .... ..... ....

MC is already super powerful, there really isn't a sense in this story beyond collecting women. It could even be a good story but it has several missing points that leave the reader unwilling to read.

The story idea is good. As long as the author doesn’t break the mcs charcter it has good prospects. But I would suggest writing the chapters on google document or using grammarly, or both. Because the amount of spelling mistakes are soon to make it borderline unreadable.

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The concept is good but the writing quality and story development are horrible. You can see the main indicators that this book would be a story only for the author's pleasure is that it went for the romance and harem right away not even giving anything to make us root for the relationship or development between the characters and it seems so forceful too, the mc who is too focused on getting women and is op right away. in my opinion, it had a great concept, but a horrible story

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Hello there for anyone reading this. I just want to say that I am just a guy who writes for fun and it's my first Fanfic, I don't mind criticism so please do tell me about my The flaws of my story. :)

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A great fanfic. Love the character (A huge fan of solo leveling) and thankfully you made his personality similar to what i think ashborn would have. Tho, he is a little straight forward, i don’t mind the harem but pls don’t pick them up like pokemons. Probably max 10? would be more than enough. (If possible, save some spot for anime waifu’s after endgame if there’s world travel) I also hope that Mc will not intervene in every problem/fight the avengers have. These are just my personal opinions. 🥰 Keep up the good work.

To anyone that wants to read a good story, avoid this lol. But to those who just want to turn their brain off and read for fun this is up your alley. Grammar, sentences, and paragraphs needs a lot of work, especially pov writing as well.

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I can't read the text message style writing. jason: how are you today john: I'm doing good that's not writing you lose emersion in the story I think you have a great idea and story here but this just takes away from everything

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