A Snake's Obsession

I was really enjoying this until i found out hiruzen was sleeping with female orochimaru in her twenties when i just had taking a liking to her

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Judt thinking it would have better if naruto ran away from the village it would have been more fitting and made sense since you portrayed it that way in the beginning of the story__________JUST SAYING FROM A READERS POINT OF VIEW

it's total garbage, the mac's personality is constantly changing, between mature, childish, intelligent and naive. Another thing that bothers is the knowledge of the mc, if only he was intelligent it would be fine, but not the mc who would have to have little knowledge knows the same as someone who is about to enter university... The love story between Hiruzen and Orochimaru doesn't make sense since it isn't really used for anything, it would make sense if it was used for Orochimaru to transform Naruto into a "villain" but it doesn't do the opposite...

I don't know how to feel about the fact that orochimaru had an affair with hiruzen (her teacher)

Author has a used goods fetish, do with that what you wish. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Female orochimaru was already taken advantage of by Hiruzen when she was younger. It's a disgusting fetish, and not allowed.

It was good at start but got kinda bad later on ngl. I don't have a problem with Hiruzen Orochi affair thing really but like other guys said it really isn't used for anything other than sympathy for Orochi.

Reveal Spoiler

Muito bom, pega umas coisas que eu nunca tinha pensado (OrochixNaruto) e faz uma ótima história, e o nome obsessão de uma cobra se encaixa perfeitamente com a obra e com o quão obsessiva Orochi é em qualquer coisa que envolva o Naruto

the story is very interesting and i found the characters with a good development, if i had to say one thing it was the beginning which i think was a bit confusing but then it gets the hang of it and is good with constant updates, i think it's a good fanfic .

I'm giving this fanfiction five stars right now everything is good it's well-written and it seems more real than the original series which was you know if I foresaw dnd's when it was supposed to be for you know older teens

I liked it. Good grammar, only sometimes he and she problems found. Is a good naruto fiction, recommendable.

useless piece of shit. used goods orochimaru