Tale Of A Bender

Story about Jude who transmigrated to a fictional world with no actual cheats It contains Romance some lemon scenes and may be Harem not sure yet. As for the story, I haven’t really planned anything but I will make it as i write

Don't let the cover fool you. The author secretly killed off Toph and replaced her with a mature, curvy, submissive, older girl with the same name. as of yet the MC has no real backstory except hes awesome at bending, it'll probably stay that way because emotions allude him. probably won't get over the disrespect thats been done to toph. shame on you.

Have read 4 chapter soo far and having great expectations for the future update, keep it up author [img=recommend]. ps: hoping the story will go far, many avatar fanfic stop midway

I like it.

Well... There are not many... or none at all where Toph is one of the heroines, it was a pleasant surprise, even more so that this toph version is more mature, more sêx^y and curvier. Now onto the novel itself... it needs to be edited as its has a lot of redaction issues. One of thhe most annoying is the dialogue... Its extremely hard to understand where the dialog starts and were it finishs... I recommend that the dialog is always put in a new line or always the first part of the text... Like this: "This is a dialogue", some text for background. Followeb by some info dumb. [New line] "Next dialog".... Also, sometimes author forgets to use "" for conversations, making it even harder to understand. Lastly.... POWER UP TOPH!... She learnt metal bending due to being caged... but thats only cause she thought about it because being trapped. IF mc introduces the idea of bending metal, sand, lava, glass, mud, liquifying (turn earth into a state similar to quicksand which quickly swallows anything).... Earthbending should allow to bend INORGANIC matter... so any piece of earth, metal, mineral is a go.

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Not bad at all i just hope it doesn't get dropped ....................................................................................................

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Loving it and i cant wait for more! I wabt jude to grow and love. _░▒███████ ░██▓▒░░▒▓██ ██▓▒░__░▒▓██___██████ ██▓▒░____░▓███▓__░▒▓██ ██▓▒░___░▓██▓_____░▒▓██ ██▓▒░_______________░▒▓██ _██▓▒░______________░▒▓██ __██▓▒░____________░▒▓██ ___██▓▒░__________░▒▓██ ____██▓▒░________░▒▓██ _____██▓▒░_____░▒▓██ ______██▓▒░__░▒▓██ _______█▓▒░░▒▓██ _________░▒▓██ _______░▒▓██ _____░▒▓██

Li a historia até e gostei muito de como ele apresenta os personagen , fazendo o MC muito talentoso para dobra mas mesmo assim não sabendo fazer tudo desde o inicio da mais veracicidade e imersão na historia espero que ela continue pois é muito boa.

very nice, i like it -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more. More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more.More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more.