why do you monologue soo much ?Sometimes it just irritating to read your chapters ............................................................
3 years ago
60
Matteo_Sgarzi
I will be honest. Russian author work even translated are sometime harder to read than MTL.
Not joking some times i can't understand half a chapter of the story
3 years ago
8
Hero_MT
Nice Story
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3 years ago
3
BrokenandBored123
If it was possible I would give negative stars for grammar. If you are writing it yourself, stick to your native language, because you can’t write English to save your life. If someone is translating it for you, shoot them.
9 months ago
1
G2l
use google translate on this : la novela es muy buena ,sigue asi .......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
1
Goven_Mazarini
Why are there so few reviews! This ff is good!
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3 years ago
1
1_MASTER_1
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without
offending anyone who thinks differently
from my point of view, but also by looking
at this matter in a different way and without
fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by
considering each and everyone's opinion, I
honestly believe that I completely forgot what
I was going to say.
why do you monologue soo much ?Sometimes it just irritating to read your chapters ............................................................
I will be honest. Russian author work even translated are sometime harder to read than MTL. Not joking some times i can't understand half a chapter of the story
Nice Story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If it was possible I would give negative stars for grammar. If you are writing it yourself, stick to your native language, because you can’t write English to save your life. If someone is translating it for you, shoot them.
use google translate on this : la novela es muy buena ,sigue asi .......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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