for a story that ended my joy in less than 10 minutes, I must congratulate you. the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the grammar, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it, it will be good for your mental health
2 years ago
104
Brokedepressed
Will he be able to become Captain Falcon again? I assume his Captain Falcon form was damaged and needs time to recover. Or is it damaged beyond repair? Personally I hope he gets it back in time for AFO’s next appearance in Kamino. It would be hilarious to have him return just as he and All might are about to throw down after Bakugo gets kidnapped.
3 years ago
58
Kurama24
Reveal Spoiler
2 years ago
51
TyrantTron335
MC with Imagine Breaker is embodiment of Bad Luck. I hope MC can survive in MHA World. It will be excellent if MC can travel to multiverse like Marvel or DC World.
3 years ago
42
Animatic
I like where this is going. I regret reading it on its early chapters. I've been searching for a fanfic like this.
I've been a fan of the toaru series and bought all the LNs. I've read till the latest chapter and Imagine Breaker is more broken than it seems. It denies Good Luck and if the MC can wield it properly it can deny Bad Luck as well.
3 years ago
39
Godkinhdhfrhdgg
At first it was good but he was just another all might at his full power then the mc received two big nerfs that just made him a slightly stronger izuku and he did a bunch of changes just for the plot to go the same way in the end just not good
2 years ago
31
Lagash
the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it
I got bored and got cringe at some part but still fun to read and good Grammer. very good not gonna lie, entertaining to read but got some vandetta at some part
so....
2 years ago
11
Argent_ASNC
only according to the description of the profile of MC, the desire to read has already disappeared...................................................................................................................
2 years ago
10
Man_of_culture
There are a lot of basic grammar mistakes, like in ever other sentance. It makes this novel look like a badly translated Chinese novel. Author you have already written so many chapters, at least use some basic correction tool or get a proofreader or something. It would make the FF far better than this mess.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe:
Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat.
Ingredients:
24 frog legs, skin removed
1 cup all-purpose flour
½ cup cornmeal
1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed
1 tablespoon ground black pepper
2 teaspoons salt
1 teaspoon minced onion
2 eggs
½ cup milk
2 cups vegetable oil for frying
1 cup peanut oil for frying
Cooking Instructions:
Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl.
Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep.
Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs.
Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs.
Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
2 years ago
5
Mastarius
when you see a fanfic with a lot of chapters it's like oh yeah, but when you start reading it the quality is...
a year ago
4
Zer_0
At first, it was nice, light FF with acceptable grammar, ok dialogs and fine plot, even if somewhat forced, making it an enjoyable read...
However, at some point it started to feel as if it was written by ChatGPT.
Gender pronouns are sometimes switching multiple times in one sentence, plot feels forced with a strength of a bunch of hardcore shippers and while the memes woven into the story were nice at first, with the way it is written now makes it just painful to read.
I started to catch myself just glossing through paragraphs of dry humor, boring fight scenes and "peak comedy" as if taken from C rated ecchi anime from 80s, hoping for it to be better again.
But maybe it's best to let it go...
for a story that ended my joy in less than 10 minutes, I must congratulate you. the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the grammar, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it, it will be good for your mental health
Will he be able to become Captain Falcon again? I assume his Captain Falcon form was damaged and needs time to recover. Or is it damaged beyond repair? Personally I hope he gets it back in time for AFO’s next appearance in Kamino. It would be hilarious to have him return just as he and All might are about to throw down after Bakugo gets kidnapped.
Reveal Spoiler
MC with Imagine Breaker is embodiment of Bad Luck. I hope MC can survive in MHA World. It will be excellent if MC can travel to multiverse like Marvel or DC World.
I like where this is going. I regret reading it on its early chapters. I've been searching for a fanfic like this. I've been a fan of the toaru series and bought all the LNs. I've read till the latest chapter and Imagine Breaker is more broken than it seems. It denies Good Luck and if the MC can wield it properly it can deny Bad Luck as well.
At first it was good but he was just another all might at his full power then the mc received two big nerfs that just made him a slightly stronger izuku and he did a bunch of changes just for the plot to go the same way in the end just not good
the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it
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I got bored and got cringe at some part but still fun to read and good Grammer. very good not gonna lie, entertaining to read but got some vandetta at some part so....
only according to the description of the profile of MC, the desire to read has already disappeared...................................................................................................................
There are a lot of basic grammar mistakes, like in ever other sentance. It makes this novel look like a badly translated Chinese novel. Author you have already written so many chapters, at least use some basic correction tool or get a proofreader or something. It would make the FF far better than this mess.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
when you see a fanfic with a lot of chapters it's like oh yeah, but when you start reading it the quality is...
At first, it was nice, light FF with acceptable grammar, ok dialogs and fine plot, even if somewhat forced, making it an enjoyable read... However, at some point it started to feel as if it was written by ChatGPT. Gender pronouns are sometimes switching multiple times in one sentence, plot feels forced with a strength of a bunch of hardcore shippers and while the memes woven into the story were nice at first, with the way it is written now makes it just painful to read. I started to catch myself just glossing through paragraphs of dry humor, boring fight scenes and "peak comedy" as if taken from C rated ecchi anime from 80s, hoping for it to be better again. But maybe it's best to let it go...