My Sentient System
"Error!
No compatible system found.
Searching database."
It was then that Rey understood what it meant to be crushed by a single sentence.
"Compatible system found.
Bonding with system A-1927"
Rey was left dumbstruck, he experienced a ton of emotions in just a few seconds.
He did not pay much attention to this event as he was very much engrossed with the fact that he finally got his own system, after waiting since he was a child.
But this never seen before event is sure to have its repercussions and in its centre was Rey Shelding.
In a world where every person has a personal system and people without them are considered different, low-life, Rey even with his system is still different thanks to the error. Will this error lead Rey on a path of success or plunge him into a life full of despair and agony? (probably the former if you ask me)
Long ago, an unknown being gifted humanity with the power of system to help them survive the increasing onslaught of monsters which forced them to take shelter in a corner of the world.
Fast forward a couple of hundred years later, humanity has now populated most of the known land, thanks to their newfound powers but once mystery still remains.
"You peeps are like us but way too weak to even do anything. But isn't it funny how I am forced to rely on you for help.
No cap but as you are, you guys would probably die even before the battle starts.
I'll wait till you guys are strong enough to realise the truth behind this power."
The words of the unknown being or now referred to as 'the primordial being' have been a topic of fascination for researchers and adventurers who kept trying to find the truth behind them.
Now considered as nothing more than a thing of the past, Rey fascinated by them, decided to uncover their true meaning.
Journey along Rey as he goes from an aimless genius to someone who is more responsible towards his duties as he experiences challenges, friendships, betrayals and love (I hope). He will meet new people, some friends and many enemies but most importantly he will unravel the truth about his system all thanks to a single ERROR!!!
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This is my first novel and first time publishing something that I have written, so I am really excited.
This is my take on what if everyone got a system in the real world without any dungeon,game or tower.
Please forgive the grammar as my native language is not English but it will get better I hope.
Early chapters may not be the best but it I am still learning so they will definitely get better. The pacing may be a problem as it may be slow at some paces and fast at other but that will be due to my inexperience as a writer and I promise to improve as a writer alongside this novel.
Updates may not be regular as I have to focus on my studies so sorry for that in advance.
This is the author with a shameless 5 star review (I don't think there is any author who wouldn't give his story 5 stars) so I'll review it in steps. MAIN CHARACTER- The protagonist Rey is a genius with an idiotic behaviour and is quite annoying. I also get annoyed by him. But there is a backstory which I hope to explore and there is a reason for his actions, so if you could bear with him. It is not weak to strong because the mc is already strong but there will be change in his attitude and behaviour which will help him become a better version of himself. The MC will not be completely op for now, might change depending on what I feel and what you guys say. PLOT- The plot, to understand easily will be like a vrmmorpg but in a real world without any tower or dungeons (if that makes it easier). There are many novels in which there is a system that can talk but I wanted to create a system which is very much human and isn't defined by the system rules, so the plot for me is pretty interesting. WRITING- Now this is tricky. I won't say I am good or what I have written is good because I still don't think what I have written is good enough. So that is something you guys will have to read and decide. But I do know that 50 chapters later the writing won't be the same cause I will try to improve on it. PACING- I honestly don't know whether I am going slow or fast because I try to be as descriptive as possible so that you as readers can imagine what I am thinking and that might make it slow paced. I am fairly new, so sometimes it might be fast or sometimes slow. ROMANCE- There won't be a harem and romance will not be coming anytime soon. Though there is and the first to guess, I'll add your character in the story.