An Asian gun mafia dies a sudden death and is punished to ten thousand and eight years in hell. Life after death. What is it that dies with a person? and what is it that stays? Desires. Never-ending desires. Desires to control. The desires for power. Something that stays with a soul even after death. Winston dies but, his desires and purpose stays with him into this new world of darkness. Join the journey of Winston to explore the unknown territories of hells. The complex power structure and his journey from the illusion of power to absolute power.
how evil is the mc? does mc kill every living being or is he some joke that cant even kill children and women?
This is a very intriguing novel. I can see that why it is a worthy read. As for tips to make it a bit better...elaborate/specify/describe the details of 'Winston's clothes, the place etc. Cause from what I know about male novels, they tend to be detail-heavy on world building. But be sure to not put too much, and still focus on the events/scenes. Other than that hats to you 🥰🥰🥰
I'm not going to nag about grammar when the mental images produced by the writing itself are too epic for any small mistakes to make their way into my conscious mind. A little bit of retouching could go a long way but the pictures the words paint are just *chef's kiss* epic opening scene btw.
My first book. thinking about it for a long time and finally did. I believe the story has a great story and very good characters which will evolve as the story unfolds.