Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]
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Xaloc's emotions did not fluctuate
much, remaining calm even when his grandmother revealed herself to be Nyx, the goddess of the Night and hastily whisked the entire family to Shangri-La, the paradise of the gods.
He remained calm even as he sneaked away to Atlantis to find his missing grandfather.
But in Atlantis, Xaloc would not only find his missing grandfather, but he would also discover a world so dark and filthy that it would shatter his moral compass, forcing him to seek strength by all means necessary and do everything to come out on top.
His path has been predestined, that is till he met Jamal.
To Jamal, a transmigrator, the beginning of wisdom was the art of staying away from danger and he intended to follow it to the letter. However as he gets to know Xaloc, a thought came unbidden into his mind. Perhaps he could save the murderous villain.
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Excerpt
Rule number two. Play with your hair….
Jamal suddenly stood up and Xaloc smiled as he twirled his hair behind his ears.
Jamal moved over and gently touched his apprentice's hair. He brushed down the unruly soft hair before tying it into a low ponytail with a hair band... At least now, Xaloc's long hair would stop disturbing his reading, as a person with long hair, he understood the pain of controlling it.
The smile on Xaloc's face instantly disappeared. The second rule did not work, it was a scam.
It seems like seducing Jamal might not be as easy as he thought.
Cowardly and always acting gong × Cold and determined shou
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it's a great story like the integration of the characters and the slow build up of the narritive. The action sequences seem perfectly tought out and flow pretty smoothly
The way it started is truly captivating. The synopsis is well written. It shows what u can expect. And the way the author build the story, characters everything is just beautiful. all the best author..
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The writing quality is honestly amazing and is definitely above average. Everything is very descriptive to ensure a greater, visual experience for readers, which is nice. The plot seems interesting and diverse as well, because it incorporates different gods from around the world as well as the author’s own ones. So far, the stability of updates is steady, but it is too early to make too many comments on it. However, there are still some errors that I found, while reading through the book. This includes grammatical errors (e.g. tenses, some unsuitable use of words and accidental, extra spaces) and punctuation mistakes (e.g. missing/unnecessary commas and full stops as well as capitalisation errors). Just as a reminder, don’t worry too much as there’s just some and everyone makes mistakes. Good luck on writing the rest of your book!
The first scene was moving and a wonderful start to a novel. The many Gods and goddesses appearing got me excited for more. I am looking forward to Xaloc's meeting with Jamal. Don't stop writing Author!
I really like your book more so the beginning, and storyline is good, it's very catchy and intriguing, I love, will read more chapters from you.
I really like second chapter of this novel Great writing quality better than other than others and chapter flow nicely reading forward to know more about this nice novel...[img=recommend]
I really liked the first chapter. Especially with the first scene, I really hope the rest of the novel continues like this....
Story flows nicely with the touch of the godly pantheons for the first six chapters and it is immersive. Follow Xaloc on his journey, for now it is the start!
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This was an amazing story. I very much enjoyed reading it!
I love how detailed this novel are, and it become one of my favorite novels I ever read, thank you for making this wonderful novel!!!
A good story, fun to read, and fresh for everyone. The pacing is smooth, not rushed, and not delayed. The characters are enjoyable to follow. The plot is interesting. I recommend this to all readers out there.
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okay, the only reason why I won't probably read too much of this is that if I take on another book with any romance for serious reading, my brain will explode. but it's good. the names of people and things give me a nice, mythologically inspired boost. the storytelling is vivid and with every sentence, there is something poetic about this world being pointed out. this book cured my headache and made me feel a lot better today. thanks for that.