[The original draft of ] Onslaught : Universe Without a Conscience
Author: Ra10n
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Twilight got tangled up in a very big mess of the universe. He and his comrades are trying to grow more and more stronger such that they could survive. They have no idea the danger they are in and the problems they are going to face. The universal welfare is going to change everything.
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The world background is a tough cookie to understand but there is a pretty good description of the character. Writing needs to be improved a bit more but overall pretty good book.
Your concept is very interesting but your writing quality needs to be improved and make paragraphs short and world background and character description is good
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