Hikaru crossed to Misty World with billions of other players. This world is full of monsters and fog.
Hikaru thought he wouldn't be able to survive in this horrible world when he suddenly possessed an SSS-class skill.
[Ding! Maximum Evolution.]
[Ding! Do you want to evolve Succubus into Fallen Angel?]
[Ding! Do you want to evolve Komodo into the Darkness Dragon King?]
[Ding! Do you want to evolve the Wooden Sword into a God Sword?]
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Hikaru: "In this world, I am the lord."
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Hi everyone, this is my first novel so... may be it's have so many mistake or something unlogic. Yeah, I know that and I'm working hard to correcting them. Please... keep supporing me and leave the comment, I will fix it immediatly. ^^ (Don't quit this book just read 30 first chapters ._. )
if you don't like an Idiot MC, this isn't for you. unnecessary redundant words, inconsistency (on names or number), lack of details on some skills or explanations. stupid mc(need to be said twice), author trying to be mysterious with the plot but did it in a bad way resulting in forced plot. this feels like reading a draft rather than novel. read first 10 chapters, you'll know what I feel. author/TL really need to rewrite the entire novel to make it more interesting. if you guys know a novel where the mc got a skill that give him x1000 rewards, this novel feels the same. both done in a bad way
gonna be honest i gave it a try read till the paywall came and most of the story was so random . in my eys dumb mc enmys too lucky and only focused with mc .
writing quality (4/5): it is very readable and has good grammer. story development (1/5): the amount of inconsistencies is enough for so many people, including me, to just drop this out of frustration. character design (2,5/5): not amazing but not as dumb as most mass transmigration/lord novels. updating stability (4/5): good, nothing really to say about it. world background (2/5): also a lot of inconsistencies.
a character with 50 base stat can kill a ur with 2.5k stats (not even injured). suxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsux
In the first time i though there will be OP MC trashing everyone around him but, fortunately it wasn't, even though in the beginning MC seems like OP since many people with much powerful than him appear it doesn't seem like he too OP. So yeah it was good novel to read. I kinda waiting for how MC develop his romance
this is a type of novel i would not recommend you guys to start reading now, let it have more than 200 chapters then you should start reading or else you will get frustrated like fr, like i am right now, not bas read if you can ignore the thicc plot armour for the real mc of this story.
Someone tell me this gets better because the grammar is really rough, the story and characters are insanely inconsistent and the author cant do basic math. I'm really contemplating dropping this Though I love the story idea And the system, the inconsistencies and forced plot is making it hard not to.
Everyone is just a pawn of op beings that groom their chosen person and change their nature. Even the MC’s ppl/summons do stuff behind his back.
Doesn't make any sense;the numbers don't add up from the get go in the first fight with Sherwin he should've died there and then mc has no personality, and then he does take a stand on something (no sleeping around until he deals with his ex) to then immediately sleeps with Vanu who, he acknowledges is insanely suspicious and does nothing about it honestly the ONLY thing that'll get me to continue to read this novel is if someone tells if he ever figures out he's getting played and what chapter, nothing less
Novel is good though inconsistent and the mc acts like a moron a lot but in my opinion I don’t think it is good enough to spend money on
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I read till chapter 35 and I felt the book is quite underrated. I have read some negative reviews about the book i think they are a bit over exaggerated.I agree this book is far from perfect but some people have reviewed this book to harshly.The MC is to my liking he is very cautious, the world is cruel I liked the setting.Also the mc has anti-hero elements.
although I haven't read many chapters (only 14) here is what I have found. the story has no major grammatical errors, so it is easily understandable, and the story does seem to be interesting, but that is about it. the pacing is very bad, the mc is supposedly getting super powerfull items extremely fast, which breaks the whole idea of something being rare. if everything the mc gets is supposedly broken, then those things can only be considered normal to the reader. next is the rivals/enemies. the mc supposedly got many overpowered abilities and summons from the start, yet still gets his butt whooped by a guy that is supposed to have weaker abilities / items. so although this story is quite interesting to start, it is hard to really enjoy. my advice to the author is to just slow down a bit, flesh out the enemies, and the main characters allies a bit more so we have a deeper attachment to them. And the last thing is to make the mc work more for his items/abilities, free hand outs are nice and all, but if the mc receives basically everything quite easily (yes the mc doesn't necessarily receive them easily per say, but when he receives multiple super op items within a chapter or so without any real build up. that is what I mean by easily) then the reader doesn't get the satisfaction of the mc getting that hard earned reward, which in my opinion is the whole point of putting something like that into a novel. other than that I think it is still a pretty good novel overall.