Blood, Wolves, and Death

Definitely not an alt of the author, i love this story. made me go wow, how can this author be so funny, charming and attractive on many occas ions

Writing wise, descriptions and all that, there's nothing for me to say but superb.The pacing, on the other hand, is slow in the beginning and starts to pick up by the third chapter. Which I think is well-written and has the potential to hook the readers. But the fourth chapter is a bit of a rollercoaster. With all the changes in time and places (the one with the dashes), it felt like reading a movie scene and personally, I think it can be confusing. As for the MC, you have written well the frustration of the young teen of wanting attention and acknowledgement from the father and how the mention of his age made us understand why he made an immature decision, and even his actions. Overall, it's a very nice read for a fantasy story and I hope it'll reach your targeted audience. Well done👍🏼

Strongly recommend. Loving the story thus far. Please keep going. Likes: The author is very descriptive. Characters have their own personality and do not seem forced. Little to no grammar mistakes. Werewolves, Vampires, Blood. Dislikes: At times, it can be hard to follow how much times have passed between scenes.

Very cool slow paced begging that introduces characters and the world around them really well, the character feel genuien and the text is very well written. This story has great potential, would recomand :]

Wanted to read only two chapters but now I am fully invested in the story. The descriptions, the emotions, the characters, the plot, the world building are all chef's kiss. Sure the pacing was slow at the first but now it's ok. So overall I recommend this.

This review is part of a first-chapter review swap. The opening chapter does a great job setting up the sort of story I'd expect from the synopsis. The MC wants to join his father in hunting monsters, but is told he's too young. But things seem to be getting more dangerous out there, and his time might come before his parents think he's ready. The visual descriptions and all the details of the mansion where the MC lives are great. Unfortunately, the mechanical quality of the writing itself is really bad. If this doesn't bother you, definitely give this book a try.

Good side: I have to say, I am quite entranced by the description of the background/scenery. It felt like I was there, immersed into the setting. The flow was also very natural and didn’t feel like different cloths patched together. Additionally, the mc’s and other characters personality can be seen. Why it’s almost as though they are alive. The usage of words are simply marvelous, they guide the reader’s mind to the right direction and effect. They make you laugh, fear and dread. To this point, I have to say, the author is good at recreating atmosphere. Not only through the presentation of words but also the metaphors which are used on the right doses and intensity, making the story very flavorful. I especially love the mystery with the replay, and my goodness your mastery of language is incredible. The narration is so good, my curiosity is piqued every word of the story. How to say it, the realisticness of the character, the responses, thoughts and dialogues. They all fit in like jigsaw puzzle. My friend, you are painting a picture, and what a beautiful scenery it is. Also: I love how you create suspense, never a boring moment here. Cons: Sometimes the dialogues are continued by a one sentence elaboration- for example, “[a line]” I retorted/ an action. This contrasts your very detailed writing thus far and sort of prevents itself from congruently mixing into the rest. This might be a writing style, but I suggest adding more detail. For example, how far the rock traveled after being kicked, maybe you could add a foreshadowing through symbolism with the rock’s fate too there. I see this occurring throughout your chapters, “she added,” “[] shouted,” whilst there is nothing wrong with it, the story would be much more epic if there is an elaboration, since the shift is rather jarring. Other than, the uneven length of paragraphs there is not much to pick on. Congrats- you are an epic writer 🎉

amazing story full of plot twist and questions as promised. i love it and will continue reading because i wont those answers 🤣🤣❤❤❤

Some few grammatical errors here and there but still a good book, backed by potential idea and patience, it will go a long way, good job author.

The details in the book is not overbearing in the slightest. They give off a warm, poetic description of the place where the mc, Ford, is. Sometimes, it does get confusing. I think that the story can get mushy fast with the amount of details, and fluctuates based on whether there is or isn't dialogue. There is no-to very little gramatical mistakes, so good job for that. It isn't my favorite in terms of hook, but I think that many others enjoy it. There is a fine balance between too much information, and too little. Try explaining the risk that the characters takes, as well as explaining what would happen if the character doesn't get there. That is a quick and good way to create a hook. All around, it is not a bad book. IF you are a fan of blood, wolves, and death (toootally accidental joke) then I think you will definitely like this book.

I'll start with this... This book is certainly unique. It's definitely not what you will expect from a Webnovel, so it's a real breath of fresh air. The first chapters can be really confusing for those who aren't used to reading. I feel like the focus of the book is more on the character development side than world building from what I've read so far. I do like the mix of tragedy and a pinch of horror as well. Just minor grammatical and punctuation errors but there's nothing a quick proofreading can't solve, no?... In summary, this book has a lot of potential, but you have a lot of improving to do. We all do 👍

issues: You bounce between past and present tense, always stick to one. In this case it would be past. This leads into the next issue. Sentence structure. You have nice descriptions, but it is immediate overshadowed by repeated phrasing, and poor word choices due to slipping out of past tense constantly. The Dialogue. Punctuation is a problem, easily fixed. But the incorrect use of dialogue tags with over description of what's all ready being conveyed, requires you to look at the redundancy. Other than that the story has good pacing, and paints a clear picture of what's happening, and where.

It's interesting, it reminds me of "A Song of Ice and Fire" in the first few chapters, despite having very different writing. The writing is good, and it has a nice feeling of suspense. The characters seem to have a good development. The weak point is that the update is not regular at the moment, but it can be improved. Cheer up!

I liked the first chapters, especially since you described the world around the characters so well. Your grammar is perfect, and so is the pacing of the story, I really liked the twist in the plot. But why didn't you upload for so long? I would recommend this story to everyone <3