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Hello there. The Author here. This is my first take on novels. so I'm admitting earlier that there will be short comings. So if you find them, kindly comment so I can improve it in the coming chapters.

"This is an extraordinary novel, very well written and a pleasure to read. The story content is superb. . So good you will not want to put it down."

It's soo great. The setting is great. The starting is great too. Character introduction is good. Overal if done well then it can be soo good

The starting is good. It is not rushed too much. Though the chapters are introductions now hope it will dive into the depths of plot in the upcoming chapters.

Wow, this book reminds me of a movie I've watched. The book is really interesting and the use of vocabulary is outstanding. Going to continue reading.[img=exp][img=recommend]

This book is so great and cool. I like the story telling, cover and the title. I am so excited to read all the contents, keep writing Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

The book is really great._____________________

Update regularly dude. The amount of details is really great. These type lf novels need more chapters for better understanding. Overall its really good to read.

The overall novel is pretty good. You could release more chapters since your novel id descriptive. The story is solid. Update more regularly, so the people could see your story is worth to add to the libraries

Brilliantly written. Compelling read. This Books leaves you in suspense wanting you to crave for more. But what I noticed is the excessive full stop. They're some places you're supposed to use comma and under punctuation marks instead of full stop. but this novel is great

its soo great. pls add more😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

the world building is really great. pls add more chapters. 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

the latest chapter was fire. the novel is great. .......................................................................................................

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