Actually enjoyed this, I just hope this is not the kind of fanfic where he looks for a sacred gear or becomes a devil, u can make him high human or something like that so he will be ageless through cultivation or maybe senjutsu. This fic has good potential
2 years ago
10
ZST
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2 years ago
8
Tron16
It's really good tho I am a bit annoyed that u made the female lead an OC instead of just picking one of the many girls in the DXD world
2 years ago
3
AllenCross
Well.... The quality of writing is average. The update rate is similarly average. Plot: at the moment, the standard cliche with all the consequences, you will not see any deep and interesting plot twists. Everything is standard for the average fan fiction on DXD (at the moment). Character design: The main character is a standard oyash, with all the cringe moments from all kinds of anime, boring and dry. The rest of the characters are just dummies (fillers that are available to indicate the exclusivity of the main character) in general, everything is as usual. Well, the story as a story is an interesting world, but the author is not going to reveal it (at the moment). I recommend it if you haven't found something to read. Under the beer will go.
Actually enjoyed this, I just hope this is not the kind of fanfic where he looks for a sacred gear or becomes a devil, u can make him high human or something like that so he will be ageless through cultivation or maybe senjutsu. This fic has good potential
Reveal Spoiler
It's really good tho I am a bit annoyed that u made the female lead an OC instead of just picking one of the many girls in the DXD world
Well.... The quality of writing is average. The update rate is similarly average. Plot: at the moment, the standard cliche with all the consequences, you will not see any deep and interesting plot twists. Everything is standard for the average fan fiction on DXD (at the moment). Character design: The main character is a standard oyash, with all the cringe moments from all kinds of anime, boring and dry. The rest of the characters are just dummies (fillers that are available to indicate the exclusivity of the main character) in general, everything is as usual. Well, the story as a story is an interesting world, but the author is not going to reveal it (at the moment). I recommend it if you haven't found something to read. Under the beer will go.