THE FORMIDABLE SYSTEM

This is an awesome novel, im so addicted to it, its like the author used a charm spell on me. Once i start reading i find myself glued to it, well great job, keep it up. And pls make the chapters more frequent. [img=update]

this is my first novel, Pls you guys should support me, comment and tell me where I am meant to improve in my writting, criticism is welcomed. I will try to improve more on my updating stability Pls bare with me, as for those who gave the Nobel power stones I'm grateful Pls continue supporting me .

Nice, this is extraordinarily interesting, lol I don't really know what to say Just keep it up and try to make the updates frequent Yeah least i forget, i just wanna ask Is the Main character not too up for a weakling?

Good work keep it up. The story is well described and told. With that, it was splendid, I can say that the author has potential to do more and even put more effort to this. The plot is also steadily building up and I am hooked on every bit of it. I the writing quality is also lit!. Kudos for the Kobe well done. I am anticipating more😊

I see a writeup with bright future here. you are doing well , the story development is okay, it captivated me at first sight, but the only downside to your work is the lack of a stable update. you should try and improve in your updates. howbeit, this is a great work. i'm looking forward to seeing the writer and his novel improve.

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