My Roleplay System
A couple weeks before Lake's Martial Course Entrance Exam, While he was taking a nap during a class he is awoken by a strange beeping sound. Opening his sleepy eyes, he could sees a strange holographic screen in front of him.
[Roleplay System has successfully bonded to host. Do you wish to begin roleplaying?]
[Yes?] or [No?]
At first Lake thought he was still half asleep and half-heartedly chose [Yes].
Immediately After he saw a new prompt appear before his eyes.
[Please select the main role the host wishes to play from the following options.]
After reading that message, A series of options appeared before him. The options were so numerous that they covered the entirety of his vision. From the numerous options Lake could spot a few interesting sounding roles, [Martial Saint], [Heavenly Sage], [Harem King], [Slaughterer]…
The options were too much and they made Lake dizzy. Without much thinking Lake scanned through the list of roles and choose the role whose name caught his attention the most.
[Master of Fate]
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Disclaimer
1. Cover art is not mine. It belongs to kaslla. I took the image and edited my title onto it. Their twitter handle is ksb_x4 if you wish to check out their work.
2. This is my first novel that I decided to write to fill up my free time, so don't expect constant updates or any amazing writing quality.
3. I am willing to take criticism as I am still looking to improve my writing skills. For those who may post constructive criticism, thanks in advance.
4. Finally, thank you for taking the time to read my novel.
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Hi, Author here with a shameless 5 star review despite my story saying otherwise. The purpose of this is to clarify some things about this novel and its story to the viewers. First, this book is not meant to be some amazing story with unique plot development or anything truly extraordinary. If that was what you are looking for, then this isn't for you. This isn't to say that I plan to write a copy and paste story with repeated clichés all over the place, but I won't go into this novel expecting an amazing story with plot developments and story arcs that have never been done before. This novel was always something I started writing to fill up my free time and also finally act on my passion for writing which brings me to my next point. This is the first novel I have ever written. The quality is not going to be amazing and honestly, I am already extremely happy with the support I have gotten for this book so far as it was completely unexpected to me. Now, to clarify the biggest doubts about the story, this is NOT A HAREM!! Personally, I love harems... when they are done well that is. Unfortunately, I neither have the skill nor confidence to say I can write a good harem story with interesting characters and epic character growth and development between the MC and the female leads. The MC will interact with various women throughout the story but the story will not progress into a harem. If that was what you were looking for, this is not the novel for you. Also, you may see some negative reviews and comments about the early chapters of my book and I am ashamed to admit that most of those reviews were true. However, after I finished the first volume, I went back and took the time to make corrections to the earlier chapters, making Lake appear less like a creep and the reaction between characters feel more realistic. Although I can’t say it completely fixed all of the problems with the early chapters as I was still deeply inexperienced when writing them, it helped to deal with the major ones. These changes did not affect the overall story in anyway so if your someone who has read ahead already, there is no need to go back and read these chapters. Finally, like I said before, this is my first novel, so any feedback or flaws you may have spotted in my novel, whether they be grammatical errors or your personal opinion on the story is always appreciated. These things help to progress my writing skills and allow me to gain a completely new perspective on how to approach writing a story arc or chapter which all helps to improve the quality of my work. If you still choose to stick around and continue to read this book after reading this review, I appreciate you taking the time to read this novel.
is roleplay permanent? pls yes, can he get another roleply? i hope yes because if not then just named this book fate master system, is this harem? i hope yes because.......... well, I love harem
Man. Wt f is this?? I feel like my logic dying. Not only is MC generic CN Mc, at some point I felt like this is just a great translation of a regular CN novel. If you like this novel, either you are reading this while keeping your brain shut or you’re just too used to CN novels by now. I mean, the way MC se Xually harassed a girl just in the first 5 chapters and the girl, instead of feeling creeped out and hitting MC back, she blushed. YES she f ing BLUSHES from Se Xual HARRASMENT!! And guess what, at one point I felt like not MC manipulates the fate any make everyone brain dead, he makes himself brain dead. This makes me soo mad. Like where’s the laws? Where’s the logic? Why is everyone brainwashed and brain dead.
Would sell my first born to read this, great world building story telling and the plot twist with was just amasing 10/10 would force others to read at gunpoint
I like the concept of the story. And it has potential. But when the 'damsel in distress' scenario happens in chapter 4 itself, it's so disappointing. And the way the MC speaks to other women just irks me. What I'm saying is, HAREM is fine. But it should be done tastefully otherwise just don't do it. When you bring a woman this soon into the story, it just ruins the future plot. Another novel with potential got ruined.
Is it possible to post more than you currently are posting per week this novel is super good
I must say this is an amazing novel some things here and there could be better(Example: Lake having to play the playboy character that his sister designed for him and him breaking things off with Evelyn. Even if you don't want her to be the female lead at least make them friends or something with no romance on both sides.). But overall, this is one of my favourite novels. Other than the upper points I mentions the characters,plot,system and world is amazing. I hope if you can take take my suggestion into consideration and PLEASEEE post more chapters.
Dont know how this novel is getting popular. Good idea, but bad execution, bad plot, and worse characters all combine into a cringe dumpster.
the character design is nice, it's to my liking [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] altogether I love this story but I'll like it if it was harem😅😅😅
It’s meh. Characters are flat and boring. Which is nothing new on Webnovel. World is fine. Plot feels like it’s meandering a bit. It lacks a goal or purpose. It’s a time filler. It does nothing new or interesting. But also nothing wrong depending on what you value. I value interesting characters. So it left me feeling a bit cold.
six chapters in and already found one of the worst novel i have ever read
I've enjoyed the story so far, my only regret is that I don't have money to spend on this so I have to rely on daily ads, Is there a discord server for the book or author?
So long as this doesn't go super harem route it has a chance of being good.
Honestly, way better than I expected. I can see this novel becoming a top 50 novel in the future if it keeps its pace. Even when I first read Shadow Slave, it only had around 20 chapters and now it's consistently in first and I think this novel has the potential. While it's not completely original, no system novel is, however, this roleplay system seems very unique to me and an interesting take on the genre. I also often am surprised at the authors choices and in fact proud that she or he can avoid common tropes and mistakes. I am looking forward to this novel growing. It has potential, don't ruin it author or drop it. I will hunt you down.
I really loved it, I hope more comes out sooner. Hope that you continue this series. I just hope that the story explained more things better than just having huge paragraphs explaining what was happening like info dumps.