Just when sickly Danny, the biggest loser in town, thought he was finally going to be free of his tormentor (and family friend and crush, might I add) Vincenzo -coolest kid in school- walks into the same classroom. Vincenzo may seem blessed and highly favored, but he’s got some family issues that not even Danny can understand. Suddenly Vincenzo started acting nice and walking back and forth to school with Danny, making him wonder if there was finally something more between them. Has Vincenzo had a change of heart? Is this the calm before the storm? Will they be able to go back to the way they were as kids? Or will the unexpected appearance of Ashton Belle get in the way?
TW:Violence, Mental Illness, Abuse
Good style, good ability to convey emotions or the thoughts of the protagonist, perhaps a little more development in each chapter and less getting into Dan's head as the protagonist would make it more fluid, another option is to make the chapters a little shorter. good job