"What the hell!?" was my first impression as I was transferred to another world inside the dark forest where monsters roams and now 3 of them were chasing me, what can I do than run away as I hold my bitten right arm that was now cut. Dashing myself forward, I stumble inside a small fortress, a tower, and now I need to manage it to survive? My God, at least give me some sill forfuck sake!
This is a story of how me, a 25 years old, only middle school graduate have to survive in a world where tower is the means of power and glory, can I manage it? Well, I don't know
Too much unnecessary info dump . Put info at the bottom. Don't add Italian ,asian or etc other name just create some by yourself it will be good.your chapter flow to slow with too much redundant content PLZ work on this . Btw good idea keep working. character development not good . If you improve in will change the rating accordingly.