Power
1.Unlimited Power of Destruction 2.Perfect control
3.Tom Riddle's Magic Talent, and lot of Magical Energy
Orphan trope
Harem
1.Nymphadora Tonks
2.Luna Lovegood
3.Fleur Delacour
4.Daphne Greengrass
5.Astoria Greengrass
6.Hermione Granger
Summary:
MC is OP as fk but don't act cold towards people he care and actually listens to them (beta naive mc)
He is Heir of an ancient noble family.
A lot of MC's ass kissing, cringe af, ya this is it.
I won't recommend you reading this shit. There are way way better ff available on webnovel read those than wasting your time here.
why am I writing this then?
cause I'm a fking loser. You're not right?
sorry just got upset due to criticism. Ahh I should just delete this shit and do something productive with my life.
You can't satisfy everyone. some like Hermione, some hate her to guts. fking idiots.
I like your idea of naming him Peverell since the Peverells are one of the oldest families in the Wizarding World and Everyone knows which family is the true master of Deathly Hallows.😈
MC is a braggart Gary Stu young master and everyone else is relegated into three categories: bootlicker, girlfriend(or potential girlfriend) or enemy. If you like that kind of thing this is for you. I used to like this kind of thing and while it’s lost it’s appeal long ago for me I’m sure there are those who enjoy it. Lol MC is on the left, other characters are suit guy and author is on the right😂😂😂:
its too cringe. reads like a wattpad novel where the mc immediately goes to Gringotts and gets a bunch of noble titles and lordships. mc is addressed with 5 noble names or something at his sorting as he "struts forward confidently to the sorting hat as he is destined for greatness" ok bro, everything was handed to you congrats. everything is designed to make the mc look cool or mature but it doesn't work, he just seems like a delusional retard
you said do not read it so i will not read it
Author please add Hermione in Harem🤞[img=Loving it]
It's bad. Very bad. Like scraping the bottom of a barrel with a broken rusty spoon bad. 1 star for writing quality, story development and character design, and thats cause I can't give any less. 2 stars for world background and thats just because Rowling already gave something to work with. 4 stars for stability of updates, though if the author will keep it up or simply drop it remains to be seen. 1.8 stars in total.
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don't really do reviews but when I read description I had to. your doing great. your doing better than other people, some authors don't even finish their stories and leave it at 2 chapters. just do what what you like because no one's opinion matters if you like writing fanfics in your free time then do it. it's your choice and it's your life. some people can't even write and come up with original ideas like you have. so be proud of it
I'm Loving this so much it has great WQ, SU, SD, CD, WB, and everything thanks author so lets give this author around of applause and I will contiue to love this from now and in the future.
Do you think MC is a betta? then I don’t know what you think is alpha! MC destroyed Snape and turned him gay! MC takes what he wants, when he wants! MC is the favorite of the world and the Main Hero and as soon as he takes a step, girls and power rush into his hands!
It is little cringe but only because i have read Lot of fanfics before but decelopment is good not fast or slow… i think great story if you want to Just relax and not read something on witch you have to focus
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The fanfic novel is cringe, is Wattpad novel. MC femboy -> Gringott -> Mc femboy + billionaire + owner of old families -> end. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
THAT'S ON MY TOP 3 FIC OF ALL TIME !!! no seriously this fic is fucking good (and you said you were 17 so i'm impressed ! (you did better than me at writing fic and i'm only 1 year older than you) anyway good luck and hope your life will be good in the future so you can continue this fic 👍
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