Death God's System

Not a lot of chapters yet so not a lot to say. I will say that I absolutely adore the MC! He’s a precious lil killing machine lol. I do think the author might need to work through some edits because the dialogue sometimes feels out of place or takes me out of the story at times but other than that, a fun read so far. UPDATE PLEASE I MISS CAEDES ALREADY

Let me tell you about Death God's System. It's a book that transports you to a whole new world, where myths are real and action is non-stop. The main character? They're pretty fascinating and the differing perspective adds a lot of depth and makes the read more interesting. But what really impresses me is the world-building – it's like uncovering hidden treasures with every turn of the page. Can't wait to see where the story goes next. Overall, Death God's System is an exciting read that showcases the author's talent and leaves you eagerly anticipating more adventures.

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Shameless Author here, I plan to release 5 to 6 chapters weekly, depending on the support I gett. Hope Y'all like my book! Ask me in the comments if anyone has a doubt, opinion or anything that could help me improve the book. Yours Truly, Beer? uhh no, Bearateme-

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i can't even explain my emotions on this book, the detailed writing and the consistent update would keep you hooked. i don't want to add spoilers but damn add this book to you library ♥️♥️

The story is really well written. Read a little and you will be hooked up!

The synopsis gives the book a punch, look forward to when Caedes stops becoming a pushover and beats PPL upp😵

A story with a hooking premise. It has a very vivid and descriptive world building that will drop you into a new world. If you are searching for a story to read while drinking your beer 🍺, then this is a story for you!!!

Overall, I think this has great potential. From what I've read, it's not quite there yet, but it is still very good compared to the average. The characters and story development are good, but I feel it is going too quickly and is hard to grasp. The story and background also feel barebones and are only there for the plot. A more in-depth exposition would do a lot of good for the beginning. Taking a little more time and descriptiveness would help the pacing and overall quality.

Great story, had me invested right from the first chapter. The character writing is pretty good and I went through quite a lot of emotions while reading the story. Especially a certain character made me want to punch him in the face. Any story that manages to get such emotions out of me is a certain win in my book.

Some issues include minor grammar/spelling mistakes or clunky descriptions and dialogue that break immersion. However, most of the time the writing quality is decent. The story takes quite a few twists and turns, keeping you on your toes. Personally, this is the part in which this novel excels the most. The characters sometimes feel a little flat or clunky, and the world isn’t explained that well except in the prologue chapter 0. Imo, if you need a prologue to explain your world and its power system, then even if your worldbuilding is interesting, its exposition isnt top tier

"Death God's System" hooked me from the start with its intriguing premise and well-developed world-building. I found the main character, both fascinating and charming, providing a unique perspective that added depth to the story. While the pacing can feel a bit rushed at times, the overall potential of this novel is undeniable, I love how the author goes into detail in some part. After finishing each chapter, I eagerly want to read more. I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds. It's an exciting read that showcases the author's talent and leaves me wanting more. I will definitely recommend this book.

Story started strong and quickly catch the flow. Good character deigns and excellent plot. So far it's developing well, and shows high potential. Recommend to check out.