Dying is a part of life and if you're lucky maybe there's some kind of heaven or afterlife, but I didn't expect my afterlife to be reincarnation. I know reincarnation is a belief already present on Earth, but meeting someone calling themselves "The Author" was totally unexpected.
After making some decisions, I start my new life as the King of Knights in the world of Tensura and try to see what kind of impact I can have and maybe find someone to get close to.
Please don't drop and continue updating!
she plays second fiddle to rimuru, i was expecting a kingdom building or something in those lines(meaning she makes her own kingdom,etc) but she's just being a general to rimuru and becomes his plot Armor....
She got no other benefits from combining 3 most powerful Artoria pendragon versions other than just becoming a God-dragon hybrid. I was expecting MC will have Artoria's skill sets. But she had to buy every skills and weapon, then what was the point of the random draw. Also the dialogue between MC with Rimuru feels like written by a 10 years old
I rated this five stars because he choose the best version of artoria
In the beginning much of the story is a play by play of the original with only a few extra dialogues added. This continues until just before the attack on the ogre village, which is around chapter 14, at which point the plot that the author has finally decided to show is getting heavily forced to work with little to no reason as to why or how it fits in or works. It has the correct components to be a good story if only the author would stop heavily forcing the plot to just work. You aren't Todd Howard my guy.
please don't drop, I love stories where the MC becomes Artotia and there's not enough good tensura fanfics. this is the best of both worlds.
people just give this a five star because it's artoria in tensura and of course people who like a mc that has no goal in mind and just follow the mc(rimuru) around
Very good start honestly so much better than other tensura fics hard to find one that isn’t a 1 for 1 plot line even tho this is close it’s still better than others for the character development please don’t drop this author Also where’s her horse ain’t she supposed to have her horse?
Has artoria in it. Emiya aproves Best girl no matter where 5 stars
Eu estava interessada. Mas quando vi a Tag Yuri. Desisti. Não sou fã de Yuri👍____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
pls don't give up on this fanfic, I'm begging you.
keps forsing the story. only following the anime .
This is just sad, the first chapter had me, but 2nd to 8th lost me. The author is unresponsive to anything or anyone I honestly dont blame ya for it, you should have also added in the synopsis that it's a tag along with Rimuru. and honestly for someone so powerful it could have been a stand alone for his own adventure but you do you, Just disappointed that it turned out like that.Writing: 4 starStory dev: 2 star just a rehash of the Original with a strap on of OC.Characters: 5 star it's artoria what else can I say.Update: 4 starWB: 3 star
Reveal Spoiler
Se tarda dos capítulos solo para dar mucho contexto que al final no importa sobre su muerte y sobre como consigo sus poderes, no deja claro si es hombre o mujer el mc además se supone que va a otro mundo a vivir así que debería cambiar la obra original no literalmente solo cambiar cosas ligeras sin cambiar básicamente nada solo sigue al protagonista original sin hacer nada para cambiar algo, no sigue lo que debería ser un rey o reina por que como dije nunca deja claro si es hombre o mujer básicamente es solo una copia con un mc que no cambia nada solo existe [img=faceslap]