I bet you 163926393 dollars that you didn't read that number. You didn't even notice that I put a letter in it, but you went back to check 🤣🤣
a year ago
181
Lord_Hastur
Need Answers Is this a harem?............
a year ago
119
Luke_Lindemann
First of all it’s shadow, that should say a lot.Secondly very interesting and well written, I read it on Patreon where you should read It too for double the current chapters ( trying to help you out a little shadow😉). Overall amazing author and amazing story.
a year ago
33
Plug_O_Stien
Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
7 months ago
25
OveRlord
after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
8 months ago
23
Dokja_49_51
This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS.
Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on.
Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
8 months ago
19
Zaelum
Good piece as always!, Sad that it wasn't a harem but it doesn't really matter anyway.
Thanks for your contribution to the fanfic society of degenerates and abnormals!
a year ago
17
octoberwind
Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good
I bet you 163926393 dollars that you didn't read that number. You didn't even notice that I put a letter in it, but you went back to check 🤣🤣
Need Answers Is this a harem?............
First of all it’s shadow, that should say a lot.Secondly very interesting and well written, I read it on Patreon where you should read It too for double the current chapters ( trying to help you out a little shadow😉). Overall amazing author and amazing story.
Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS. Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on. Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
Good piece as always!, Sad that it wasn't a harem but it doesn't really matter anyway. Thanks for your contribution to the fanfic society of degenerates and abnormals!
Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good
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Five stars cause it’s shadow 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
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This story had huge potential but it was destroyed by the stupidity of the author. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad
Iron man but instead of iron man it’s chunny supersoldier mary sue.
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