I bet you 163926393 dollars that you didn't read that number. You didn't even notice that I put a letter in it, but you went back to check 🤣🤣
5 months ago
107
Azathoth2
Need Answers Is this a harem?............
6 months ago
101
Luke_Lindemann
First of all it’s shadow, that should say a lot.Secondly very interesting and well written, I read it on Patreon where you should read It too for double the current chapters ( trying to help you out a little shadow😉). Overall amazing author and amazing story.
6 months ago
31
Zaelum
Good piece as always!, Sad that it wasn't a harem but it doesn't really matter anyway.
Thanks for your contribution to the fanfic society of degenerates and abnormals!
6 months ago
16
OveRlord
after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
2 months ago
14
ilove_3260
Five stars cause it’s shadow 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
6 months ago
11
Kegula
Reveal Spoiler
2 months ago
9
octoberwind
Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good
5 months ago
9
Dokja_49_51
This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS.
Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on.
Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
20 days ago
6
NO_YURI_000
I have Just one complain why does malesia FL feels much more better hero then Tony MC …. Also MC got nothing unique except influenceal and rich background …. If he wants to be no1 hero don’t his gf is his Rival of short ?¿
I bet you 163926393 dollars that you didn't read that number. You didn't even notice that I put a letter in it, but you went back to check 🤣🤣
Need Answers Is this a harem?............
First of all it’s shadow, that should say a lot.Secondly very interesting and well written, I read it on Patreon where you should read It too for double the current chapters ( trying to help you out a little shadow😉). Overall amazing author and amazing story.
Good piece as always!, Sad that it wasn't a harem but it doesn't really matter anyway. Thanks for your contribution to the fanfic society of degenerates and abnormals!
after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
Five stars cause it’s shadow 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Reveal Spoiler
Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good
This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS. Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on. Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
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Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
I have Just one complain why does malesia FL feels much more better hero then Tony MC …. Also MC got nothing unique except influenceal and rich background …. If he wants to be no1 hero don’t his gf is his Rival of short ?¿