I bet you 163926393 dollars that you didn't read that number. You didn't even notice that I put a letter in it, but you went back to check 🤣🤣
8 months ago
144
Lord_Hastur
Need Answers Is this a harem?............
9 months ago
114
Luke_Lindemann
First of all it’s shadow, that should say a lot.Secondly very interesting and well written, I read it on Patreon where you should read It too for double the current chapters ( trying to help you out a little shadow😉). Overall amazing author and amazing story.
9 months ago
31
OveRlord
after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
5 months ago
17
Zaelum
Good piece as always!, Sad that it wasn't a harem but it doesn't really matter anyway.
Thanks for your contribution to the fanfic society of degenerates and abnormals!
9 months ago
17
Plug_O_Stien
Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
4 months ago
13
Dokja_49_51
This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS.
Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on.
Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
5 months ago
11
Kegula
Reveal Spoiler
5 months ago
11
ilove_3260
Five stars cause it’s shadow 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
9 months ago
11
octoberwind
Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good
I have Just one complain why does malesia FL feels much more better hero then Tony MC …. Also MC got nothing unique except influenceal and rich background …. If he wants to be no1 hero don’t his gf is his Rival of short ?¿
I bet you 163926393 dollars that you didn't read that number. You didn't even notice that I put a letter in it, but you went back to check 🤣🤣
Need Answers Is this a harem?............
First of all it’s shadow, that should say a lot.Secondly very interesting and well written, I read it on Patreon where you should read It too for double the current chapters ( trying to help you out a little shadow😉). Overall amazing author and amazing story.
after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
Good piece as always!, Sad that it wasn't a harem but it doesn't really matter anyway. Thanks for your contribution to the fanfic society of degenerates and abnormals!
Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS. Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on. Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
Reveal Spoiler
Five stars cause it’s shadow 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good
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I have Just one complain why does malesia FL feels much more better hero then Tony MC …. Also MC got nothing unique except influenceal and rich background …. If he wants to be no1 hero don’t his gf is his Rival of short ?¿