Ugh brother, the idea of Malfoy traveling through different universes is great, but I'm going to give you some advice, remove from your novel all those crazy and homosexual things from DC, MARVEL, NARUTO, etc, etc... send it to fantasy. worlds that coincide with the world of Harry Potter, for example game of thrones, the lord of the rings, pirates of the Caribbean, the house of the dragon, the hobbit, dungeons and dragons, etc... do I explain?, follow my advice . and your novel uffff...it would be fantastic
a month ago
10
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Not Marvel!
Not DC comic!
Not korean manga, novel, anime!
Not chinese references!
Not chinese folklore, food and culture!
Not gay references!
Not hypnosis!
Not system with soul!
Not Danmachi!
Not Honkai!
👏
a month ago
3
luis_vieira_8838
Queria que a contagem de palavras por capítulo fosse maior ,mas vejo grande potencial nesse história continue com o bom trabalho (obs: Brazil
Ugh brother, the idea of Malfoy traveling through different universes is great, but I'm going to give you some advice, remove from your novel all those crazy and homosexual things from DC, MARVEL, NARUTO, etc, etc... send it to fantasy. worlds that coincide with the world of Harry Potter, for example game of thrones, the lord of the rings, pirates of the Caribbean, the house of the dragon, the hobbit, dungeons and dragons, etc... do I explain?, follow my advice . and your novel uffff...it would be fantastic
Not Marvel! Not DC comic! Not korean manga, novel, anime! Not chinese references! Not chinese folklore, food and culture! Not gay references! Not hypnosis! Not system with soul! Not Danmachi! Not Honkai! 👏
Queria que a contagem de palavras por capítulo fosse maior ,mas vejo grande potencial nesse história continue com o bom trabalho (obs: Brazil
9.8/10