[Warning, this would have incest.]

Upon awakening, I found myself as a kid, covered in injuries, and bleeding to death. I was sure I started my new life just to die all over again... but a passing nun found me, took me in, and raised me as her son.

High School DxD: Chaotic Destruction

ACTION

ROMANCE

ADVENTURE

HAREM

OVERPOWERED

ANTIHERO

DEVIL

I’ve only read up to chapter 3 as of the moment of making this review 

Below are just some of the reasons of why i think this fic is bad and its only from the first 2 chapters 

Sudden 18 year time skip with no transition 

Human mom suddenly developing a disease unique to devils

How could his human mom know his real parents were looking for him if she doesn’t  know who they are

Human mom hasn’t been given a name yet

The way Mc acquired Ano’s power is dumb, due to said reason Ano’s soul was injured leading to the mc personality being the dominant one

Mc also thinks it’s weird and doesn’t think it was by chance and feels anos somehow bonded with him??

Mc says he has almost everything anos has but then states he only has memories of his magic cause most of anos memories are destroyed except for the ones about magic 

Rapid pov switching with no warning or transition 

Mc’s inconsistent knowledge of the supernatural 

Inconsistent narration

Mc inconsistent about weather he wants a relationship or not and why he’s even wants to date Rias even though he’s shown literally no interest in wanting to date her

Mc is supposedly handsome but we have no clue or indication of what he looks like

MC’s appearance changed when he “woke up in this body” but has no idea what he looked like before so him knowing his appearance changed doesn’t make sense and it is a completely stupid statement with no reason to exist 

Somehow infers that Aika has the unique power to tell the size of a guy’s manhood just because she was shocked when she saw him and looked at his lower body 

Somehow infers that Issei has the boosted gear because of his dragon aura and his character

Rias fell in love with the mc at first sight 

Mc can’t cure his mom’s mystery disease cause somehow even with Ano’s power he just can’t 

I could go on about chapter 3 but this shit ain’t worth the effort of explaining why its bad in meticulous detail 


it was good until you made him become rias gremory boyfriend

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Only interesting thing was Anos but the narration is literally just bad...simply bad enough to tire someone out🙄