One Piece: My code name is Green Bull

I can never understand anyone from our world who writes stories about the main character being a Marine. Yeah, pirates are nasty, but the Marines are worse. They slaughtered over 20k women and children just because they could be gol d Roger’s kid, then wiped out all the civilians of Ohara—again, just because. And that’s only what we know about. Not to mention, they claim slavery is banned, yet they help the Celestial Dragons with their slaves.

So i just want to say if you are a lore stickler then you will probably hate this book as in the first few chapters we get a devil fruit system that is more exploratory than instinctual by a large margin compared to cannon and while if you write good like with this story it can be a great read but that cant change the fact that its not exactly how devil fruits work in one piece as when one ate one they suddenly gained the complete instinctual ability to use the full power bar awakening(if you ignore the Nika fruit but given that its a literal god fruit I think it should probably get a pass on that) and if this is the fruit i think it is then the fact that the MC cant do the same seems like it will be a problem later though have not yet read far enough to tell.

It's a translation, the author should put that in the synopsis, you can tell because for a new fic he doesn't know that the fruit that controls the plants in a lodge and in one chapter he still put the luffy fruit as the paramecia of the gum

It good. I enjoy it so much with a good pace but die the character design I ma anxious and can't wait to see how he will act. Hopefully you continue writing.

I'm pleased to see this story adopting a more realistic approach. Many One Piece stories tend to follow the same uninteresting pirate themes, and while I've encountered some with a marine protagonist, most of them fall short- they often overlook the military structure. In contrast, this story represents it excellently. Typically, One Piece fanfics make characters overwhelmingly powerful right from the start and allow them to retain knowledge from the modern world. However, this story handles that aspect flawlessly. It's unrealistic to instantly know everything when raised in one place for years; only major events like executions or invasions would stand out, and even then, the details would remain vague. Narratives featuring a marine protagonist are much more intriguing than those about pirates, as they explore how a good-hearted individual navigates a system that challenges their morals. This theme is far more compelling than a simplistic, overpowered MC written by an author who misses the true spirit of One Piece. This really highlights the skill of the author of this fanfiction. I can't wait to read more- this story is genuinely a remarkable work of art!

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