Kingdom Building: Civilization Starts with Divinity

I'm not shameless; you're shameless. Let me be honest for a second. The main character isn't unimaginably strong, definitely powerful, for sure in the realms of overpowered, but she doesn't steamroll every fight and there are countless people stronger than her. Secondly, The main character makes mistakes—a lot of them. Life is a learning experience, and our protagonist is TERRIBLE at taking notes. Third, There are bugs in your skin. Goodluck.

Keep in mind, I'm an extremely harsh critic, due to the massive amounts of novels I read. From the first sixteen chapters, I am already invested. The only problem likely is the lack of clarity revolving the personality of Alchemy. We need to see more social situations to amplify our understanding of her. Not to the point she's predictable, but to the point we legitimately love or hate her as an individual based on our own ideals and hers. My currently unofficial wife: Faded1Fate, I tell you this: Try to use her thought process to answer these questions to make her more vivid, some of have already been answered: Is Kill Or Be Killed a good concept? Would you kill before threat has been shown if you believe a possibility of damage could be demonstrated? What if someone isn't physically endangering the country, but instead destabilizing it? Would execution be an option? At what point would it be? Would you manipulate your allies for the sake of your people? What would be your reaction if you realize that one of your allies has overturned the alliance? What is your ideal partner? (Compatibility question, not legitimate romance) Could you be angered to a point of destruction? Would you mercilessly kill a nation if they left your nation on the verge of annihilation? Just how smart are you? Academically wise, logically wise, psychologically wise? (Academic refers to the subjects - math, science, blabla. Logically is using logic to decide things. Psychologically is manipulation, and using people) Are you afraid of your strength? Would you kill a former ally who's actively trying to kill you?

even though I don't read stories which have females as MC (I am not sexist, I just don't feel like I can project myself in a story where mc is a female. No offense to any women, I respect and love women) but i think it's a good story

Bias Review Here 😉 I see that it is FEMALE PROTAGONIST WITHOUT ROMANCE 💒 I want to read if it is true and also Good Novel

I’m still very much enjoying this story and I’m looking forward to more~