The world of Avatar is about to see a change that will shake it to its foundations. Will the avatar be able to bring balance back to the world or will the Tower change its very foundations.
A man from our world is transported to the world of avatar being given command of his own tower bringing the wonderous world of classes and magic to his new world.
Please keep comments civil but criticism is welcome
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I do not own the Avatar the last Airbender or any of its characters this is a fan fiction*
I do not own the cover image of the owner wants me to take it down feel free to contact me and I will*
THIS NOVEL KICKAZZ LOVES THE PLOT OF THE STORY..AUTHOR DO NOT FxUxCxK THIS UP AND QUIT WENT THE STORY GOT GOOD..PLEASE DO NOT DESTROY OUR DREAM AND FUN WITH BS...IF YOU QUIT I WILL NEVER READ ANOTHER OF YOUR WORKS AGAIN.
AUTHOR AFTER READING ALL 15 CHAPTER THE STORY IS A+ FOR FUN.author just do not FxUxCxK UP AND QUIT AND WASTE MY TIME AND DESTROY MY FUN DREAM...AUTHOR THIS NOVEL NEEDS TO BE MULTIVERSE OR GIVE THE MC THE POWER TO SUMMON OTHER CHARACTERS OR THINGS FROM OTHER WORLDS LIKE MASS EFFECT,, ARE GIRLS LIKE HER GHISLAINE FROM MUSHOKU TENSEI ANIME
hello author here. just wanted to add a review. if you have the time please leave one it would be very helpful for future chapters.
AUTHOR THIS NOVEL NEEDS MORE, MODERN TECHNOLOGY..CAN THE MC GET A SKILL FOR ONLY SUMMON TECHNOLOGY LIKE MECHA AND OTHER THINGS LIKE WARSHIPS OR SPACE SHIPS......................................................................................................
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Al principio cuando la comencé a leer me molestaron varias cosas, en parte porque ese día había estado buscando nuevas historias y terminé encontrando basura, eso hizo que cuestionara muchas cosas algo extrañas que sucedieron, pero cuando me tomé el tiempo de leerla sin perjuicios, descubrí que es una historia muy interesante, la creación de la torre no es tan engorrosa como en otras novelas, pero aún mantiene la coherencia en lo que ofrece la torre a sus exploradores, no hay poderes exagerado o cosas irreales entre las cosas que obtienen y me gusta la elección del autor en cuestiones como las características del estado, las habilidades, los niveles, etc.
unique ass idea, would love this idea with other manga too if you would care.
Es un concepto muy prometedor en si me gastaría mas capítulos pero es cosa mia estoy acostumbrado a leer fanfic ya casi acabados con cientos de capítulos pero este fanfic esta muy bien pensado y si lo hacen bien puede ser muyyy bueno
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Very good to read, it brings peace at least to me, keep going author Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3
I really like the concept that this story introduces. It's got me hooked. A bit more time on writing quality would be appreciated though.
Снова МС идиот который не способен разобраться в начале истории. Серьезно, выбрать внешность или настроить уровни обучения башни, это так сложно? Только не говорите, что МС из США, и он не знает где находится Европа на карте мира.
love the idea and i think u are doing great with it i would reccomend people to read it and see for themselves as for me im not really feeling i but i can still see its got potential
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I could not get past the first chapters without getting a headache from getting so pissed off by the worst mc i have ever seen i mean he claims to play video games and know them but somehow can't recognize a character creation menu, he constantly get upset when the system literally answers his questions, he let's himself get pushed around by the fire nation, and the reason the author gives is "oh he's a normal guy" let me tell you that nothing he did was normal, he's a bitch and the dumbest Mc.