The Undead system

I'm really enjoying the story so far, please keep it up 🙏

Nice book, the story has a sense of humour to it, with the interest world building... it kept me intrigued down to the last chapter, it's unique different from normal #system and #weaktostrong troupes. i await more chs from the author

I... I really despise how slow it is. You don't need to tell the protagonist's story by beginning it with them waking up. That's like the biggest cliche ever. It took me a while to read through it because of how slow it develops. The pacing is a mess honestly. The plot is good and interesting if only the author had fixed the pacing. I appreciate the author for posting consistently though

amazing start, I really like how the author writes even though it was a bit of a slow read it grabbed my attention from the start, though i wished that the author would update more frequently via stockpile if writing everyday is just not your thing, keep it up author

I feel like anything with System in the title should be a tad bit faster paced than this, but since I'm not sure about the entirety of the author's vision, I'm assuming it's necessary build up. That said, even though the story is a bit slow to reach the system part, I think the author does well to keep the readers engaged. The relatability of Jack Anderson's life is one thing that I feel can retain the attention. His bad luck and rotten living conditions with only the slight sweetness offered by Kelly as the love interest was enough to keep me reading. While the quality of the writing could use some work (quite a bit of it, actually), it's readable, but I urge the author to aim higher. There is a nice story to work with here, but I do fear that some readers might feel betrayed by the pace. Good work though