The unexpected Primogenitor

The unexpected Primogenitor

Fantasy40 Chapters11.7K Views
Author: FrostyPaws
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Three technologically advanced species—the Eldkin, Zhra'Karn, and Xelthari—vie for supremacy in a tense universe. Nearly every inhabited world is linked by ancient technological marvels known as the Astralgates, and the power of myst allows individuals to fight at supernatural levels.



Damian Moroi is a Bloodkin—a subspecies of the Eldkin—and the talented, manipulative, and ruthlessly ambitious heir to a powerful family. But on his eighteenth birthday, revelations about his past and origins shatter the life he thought he knew, forcing him to adapt to an uncertain new reality.



A reality that might pull him straight into the cold war brewing between Eldkin, Zhra'Karn, and Xelthari…



Fortunately, he has his loving family to support him—a family that might be a little closer than most. But for now, he chooses to leave the city and planet he grew up in, letting tensions cool.



Still, with a child and several loved ones waiting for him back home, Damian has no intention of staying away forever.



A retreat is not a defeat. Even alone on an unfamiliar world, his ambition burns as brightly as ever.



And he intends to satisfy it… on this planet and beyond.



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This novel has none of the bad things, and all of the good things.

Probably.

There's no NTR or Yuri, and I've created a fantasy/sci-fi type story with new iterations of the classics.

Come check it out.

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theking_901
theking_901

honestly really impressed. I read your other novel- the fairy and the wolf one, and ended up dropping it after 370 chaps. Despite having read the other novel however I honestly can't believe this was made by the same person. It's only 14 chaps yet it has a near perfect start. It introduces us to the interesting main characters, teases us with their complex personalities, and then drops us into some good old-fashioned combat, that gives us some glimpses at what we can expect from the future brawls. I AM HOOKED only thing I'm worried about is the harem aspect, I like harem... BUT not when everyone is in the harem. like it's fine for MC to like see, but when ever female character is there to either have, fantasize, or become a slave to sex, then it devalues the whole story. there's already the mom, sister, wolf, guard, and its only 14 chapters. sure those are just the ones he "loves" but let's be serious for a moment, it's not lookin so good. I hope this book does better on this front then the wolf one

19 days ago
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_Soy_Sauce_
_Soy_Sauce_

I’ll read this in a few I’m on the porcelain throne rn but since it’s u frosty I’ll assume it’s gonna go hard

24 days ago
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