A Villain’s POV

I read it up to chapter 15. In my opinion, this book has the potential to be an engrossing novel if the author learns from his mistakes when he is writing this book. You can't say much about the whole book when it has only this many chapters but the characters are fine, they don't have much depth and they are a little cliché but you can read without feeling anger about them every chapter. Mc is not stupid and we see that he thinks before taking action, so he has some common sense in his head and you may like him (some even may say that he is smart) and for sure he is not a person who thinks only by his lower body parts, there are problems with him like author make him extremely cold in some situation but sometimes he behaves like petty and very emotional but nothing that can't be changed for the better later in the story. Worldbuilding is great and very interesting, but you just need to lower your expectations a bit to enjoy it if you have high standards. Updates are chaotic sometimes you have so many chapters that you think is Christmas and other days there are none for 2 days. The author responds to comments so he is engaged in this novel and for now, it seems like he cares a lot about the book and tries to learn to make it better, for me, that is a huge plus. In my opinion, if made well this can be more than mediocre but if the author doesn't learn from his mistakes or stop trying to improve this can be worse than mediocre. It's worth trying if you like Villain MC and have some time to spear and help this author shine by leaving your opinion in the comments. I wish you a marvelous day, friends from around the globe.

the partial five star review from the author, I just want to list some things that are important, read this before you start, so that you'll know what you are getting. MC is cold and murderous at times, this will not be a harem, but the MC will manipulate several women along the line. there will be no redemption arc, don't expect him to stop being the villain, he is a villain. it is a slow paced book, so yeah, no rush.

I finally found a gem in trash novels HAREM? NAH ROMANCE? I DONT THINK. ( HOPE IT WILL NOT HAVE ROMANCE) COLD MC? YES SMART MC? YES THIS NOVEL IS MASTERPIECE . . . . . THE ONLY PROBLEM I HAS ITS UPDATE MAN WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS! (Hahaha i should stop the glaze)

This is better than I thought, in principle not bad, although I do not like systems, especially such, but the MC of the story is not bad, and I hope in the future he will not give up, and will not start collecting a harem that he likes, but collecting a harem of "tools" is welcome, let's not love and moral dullness, we need Mountains of corpses and oceans of blood, so can you add the MC's ability to control time? It's so cool to manage both time and space at the same time.

Fairly decent, enjoyable book. I have to disagree with some of the other reviews, though. It certainly isn't a masterpiece. That being said, It does have potential, especially if the author focuses more on edits and proofreading. His name is inconsistent. There is a full paragraph in one of the more middle chapters that is a directly copied ChatGPT response, which was a bit of a surprise. If the author steps up the editing and makes sure to keep the story itself smooth sailing like it is till chapter 25 so far, it has serious potential.