"It has humor, action, and the perfect setup for Rudra’s chaotic, self-declared isekai journey."
Let's be real: Fanfiction is built on "What if?" scenarios and thrives on clichés. It exists for fast entertainment, not literary perfection. If you're looking for deep, serious, and logically intricate stories, you might be better off reading traditional novels on Kindle. So why exactly are you here, feeling "privileged" enough to critique a space meant for crazies, weirdos, and fanfic enthusiasts?
As an Indian, I can't say my father is white just to satisfy some readers, and it's important to acknowledge that there are Indians in the UK and even in the magical world (like the Patil sisters). That's why I incorporated the immigration aspect into the fanfic. Why does the character always have to have a white father and be white themselves? There's room for diversity in storytelling!
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I truly valued the customized system—it was a refreshing and rare feature. However, I was disappointed by the author's response to criticism. The author seemed to react like a frustrated teenager, rejecting all feedback without recognizing that some of the critiques might actually hold merit. A more open-minded approach could have significantly enhanced the overall experience. With that out of the way, I enjoyed the first three chapters while the story was fast-paced. I didn't get attached to any characters, but I'm sure that will change in the future chapters.
I'm only giving 1 star because that's the minimum I can give. I can understand and respect it if people like this book because they either have no idea what a good book is or because they simply feel like reading something stupid. I always look for good and serious stories and this isn't even coming near that list. Just the first two chapters had more cliche than most other books out there combined and I can honestly say I have never read such a cliche book before. The author also always responds to negative comments and critic with aggression, not even bothering to check if what he's saying is even correct. My first advise to the Author is; ignore those comments all together before you say something stupid and get even more fire. I don't know if this book is meant to be a joke or if the author genuinely thinks it's good, but in the former case, I would advise you to write in your synopsis that it is a joke story and not a serious one, this would massively reduce the critic as we reader can mentally prepare our self for the disgusting cliche in the first few chapters.
I HAD to give 1 star coz that's minimum.. It's no story, author hasn't even tried making it better otherwise anyone could have done a better job.. If you don't believe, just read the first chapter and second too.. I couldn't read more than that.. There's no flow.. Just important events (like points or notes we write for our studies).. Author, you must be deleting all the negative reviews, otherwise there's no way people would read it..
weird, bad, not funny
I read the novel after reading the comments, I was expecting it to be bad but it's OK, just bit cringe, i don't know why people are over reacting and comment section is flooding with negative and hateful comments, if you don't like just stop reading and give a opinion, don't give a hateful comment.
I don't normally hand out 1 star reviews, especially when I've only read 2 chapters here but I'm going critism route this time (pity 3 stars). The story feels like it has zero flow and is way too fast paced with these skips. The introduction itself was more weird than funny like author tried to make it out to be, system girl casually can manipulate reality/probability (making a van slip on a banana peel?), 10th birthday, "oh yeah I can use magic now btw" and proceeds to make advanced mind shield. The India stuff is already starting like author's previous work, sure it's not "THE GREAT INDIA NATION" type of stuff like how Chinese novels do it, but it does get very weird when MC just decides "I'll have an Indian dad" and the wand he gets later is specifically one made in India. It just doesn't feel quite right to read, authors previous work had the same problem.
This is crack if crack took crack. Don't expect anything of depth, or anything at all really. Expect an MC who must have been brain damaged in a weird way when he get nailed by Truck-kun.
first off, I read until ch 46 before I dropped it. I enjoy these kinds of fanfictions however I believe there should be a limit to how joke of a character should be. I do understand that the idea of rudra having issues with standing out due to mediocrity is built upon using this joking full of himself persona. However, a clear distinction between who he is now and who he was before reincarnation would further improve the stories direction. Also power scaling is crazy. otherwise, keep up the good work author kun.
Somebody take their foot off the Gas pedal, Turn the wheel so the story forcefully stops. 2 chapters in and it looks like the author time skipped 8 years or something. one moment hes in the orphanage the other hes singing on a stage the suddently hes an idol and then one phrase mentions a spelling bee contest and him being a genius then we learn about people trying to kidnap him in 2 lines of text and then gone the next (WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON) all of this in the span of 1 chapter Somebody pull the brake on the train because its gonna De-Rail
shameless reviewing and rating my new fanfic after long time try to rate and review gentlemen and women. presenting you most interesting and entertaining character Rudra D. Raja Kumara
I don’t really understand why people get so worked about the name, but I think its fine. Though the thing that irks me the most is the self deprecating humor and action Rudra gets into. I get that his mediocrity in his last life is leading him to wanting to be some type of hero in his next, but it shows no growth. His identity lacks any traits that reveal, through action, the type of person he is. He just is. No context or reason, but the thinking process “this will make me a hero/important”. Rudra is like those 2020 edge-lord OP Mcs with no thought behind them. Although I haven’t read much, I can’t want to read more.
The MC basically behaves like action hero with lot of theatrics , swagger and flexing almost everytime. It will feel cringe for fans of HP and those who read a lot of fanfics.
Dude I don't understand why you think you have the right to speak for all readers, you don't. Personally I (and many others like me) only follow stories of a certain standard. These are the rare pieces of writing that probably make it into the Top 200 category. People don't read your writing to actually laugh at something because it's not funny or entertaining. You have no logic, no original jokes, no originality. Your writing looks like a child's scribble (I assume you're under 18). I'm not saying this to insult you, if you hadn't reacted so insultingly and slanderously to all the criticisms after reading the first chapter of your novel I would have said "oh man this is a really pathetic bad novel" and wouldn't have read it again, wouldn't have criticized it, wouldn't have made bad comments. You insult people who sincerely tell you their shortcomings for no reason. If you don't care about them, just don't respond. If you're just writing for fun, why do you react so much to all the criticism? You are like a child who thinks what he writes is really good (really bad) but when told otherwise he tries to silence people by covering his ears and shouting louder. Grow up, my friend. People get annoyed by reading clichéd things and you respond by saying most of the novels here are clichéd, after killing someone are you going to answer the judge saying no my friend most of the people in xxx prison killed someone too what I did was normal?
I’m an Indian and not even taking into account the the protagonist’s race which i loved the idea, this is an amazing fan fic and first and foremost it’s hilarious its just so ridiculous and nonesenceical i love it i wanna see more of this out of fanfics. I usually hate harem books but you’ve managed to pull it off in a way that doesn’t piss me off which is amazing, i hate harem fanfics. Nevertheless this is amazing and the fact that its not just the Harry Potter universe is just … loss for words in sounds like I’m d*ckriding but daum I haven’t laughed like this from a book, ever. Great going keep it up. I’m also gonna take a look at your other work if you don’t mind, If they are anywhere near this expect more high praises from me. Keep it up, also i hope you read this otherwise it’s gonna be a bit aquarium.