SAO: I replaced him?

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Ganbatte, I hope this is a good fan fic since there isn't much story about SAO in this web. Hopefully you don't put too much smut, I don't mind a villain stealing the heroine but most of the time Too many lewd/sex scenes that it ruins the story

Another horrible ChatGPT book 🤢🤮 why can’t authors here actually believe in themselves and write their stories themselves?

Tbh, it's boring. .

auto 5 start because this is SAO FIC, i back review after have more chapter

The plot is just terrible, the main villain of the second half of the first season, who locked Asuna in Alfheim online, instead of just not making the same mistakes as in the plot, just went to risk his life in a virtual reality game, although according to the plot he would have already received Asuna and Kayaba's company and also developed a new version of the VR helmet, I just can't say how bad this plot is and the lack of logic in the mc's actions, there's really no point in the author choosing a hitman as a villain if he's just a copy of Kirito... That is, if you're a villain, act smart, but here it's just trash. If you want a hitman in coo, make a hitman in irito, or at least an ordinary player, but if you want a story about a villain, write about a villain, you can't sit on two chairs, understand?

I dont understand the reviews, I love the fact theres a SAO fic but I hate the fact its this one. The MC Is Suguo that trashy guy who tries to marry Asuna, somehow hes as trashy here. He's somewhere around 30 years old. Spoilers but he completes the main quest in 13 chapters. He calls out in the middle of the Plaza to find Asuna, convenient. then he babies her into fighting and then after the first boss meeting forcibly kisses her getting a "You're impossible" in response. Theres legit no relationship before that, at most he ruffles her hair which would be more like a dad figure since hes DOUBLE HER AGE.

Really good. keep up the good work! One thing though, I think you should focus on sao in this story rather than going to different worlds

La idea es buena pero las acciones del protagonista dejan mucho que desear, reencarno un día antes del lanzamiento de SAO y no hizo nada más que entrar al juego prácticamente sin hacer ningún plan, esperaba que intentará obstaculizar el lanzamiento del Juego o algo así, al menos esperaba que el autor nos mostrara algunos de sus preparativos, también es extraño que no tuviera en cuenta sus limitaciones, porque en ningún momento se nos dice que era un gran jugador o deportista, esperar que sea mejor luchador que Kirito y el tramposo Kayaba es tonto. No es que la historia sea mala, pero tiene algunas incoherencias que probablemente se tratarán de ocultar con un sistema o armadura de trama.

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The story flow and adaptation is very good

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