Restless Dragon

Hey! Author here. This is the first book i’m ever writing for others to read properly, so I can’t give tell how good or bad it is. Obviously, due to the power of author bias, It may not be very accurate but I’ll try to give it my honest opinion as a rating, it would be nice to get proper feedback from people more experienced than me. Bye and thank you!

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Critique: I like the story overall, however, I'm still wanting to know a little more about the world he's in, you can either tie it into the story, or add it as an auxiliary chap, but please find a way at some point in time to add more info on the world this is in.;,;. all in all, this is a good story.;,;. Hope you keep writing.;,;.

Its a decent light novel, there are occasional mistakes in terms of grammar but fine overall. I like the world background, it has a lot of potential and I can see it becoming an interesting fussion of Chinese and Japanese lightnovels, perhaps even with other cultural references mixed in. The characters as a whole are quiet 2-dimensional excluding the main character but its slightly early to make a good judgment regarding that and it seems as if the author is working on that aspect. Overall its not quiet up to the standard of professional light novels but is a good read if you have nothing else to do.

Good story. It is rather unfair to rate it low due to some misunderstanding. Most novels here are similar so its totally wrong to blame one novel.