In a world where many knew as a game, a place full of magical creatures, demons, gods and any more humanoid races, a place where magic arts and martial arts coexist. Follow Klause on his journey as he unlock the mysteries of these world, as to understand the reason why is he here in a world where power rules. Accompanied by his previous job avatars watch Klause as he breaks free from the shackles of these world and unlock jobs to conquer the universe.
The grammar is absolutely horrible. You should find an editor ASAP, or work on your grammar skills. The story so far (2 chapters) looks promising. Its kind of an overused genre, but I think you could make it work, with enough originality and hard work (and especially stable updates xD). Keep it up and I hope to see great things!
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