The Outrageous General and her black bellied Husband

it's kind of a slow paced story so far, but it's a good story. Written well enough it could be better, but then there's always room for improvement isn't there.

Its a shame that this story is on hiatus because from what I've read so far its not bad and has a lot of possibilities. I like what I'm reading so far, the challenge is waiting for updates due to author encountering writer's block. My other issue is the fact that the chapters feel too short, two could combine into one but it could be a word restriction thing. Anyway, I hope this story comes back. Take care and good luck

Thanks for the best of my reading time. The story is getting better and better. I really appreciate your good work and the plots are interesting. My best wishes to you. Fighting 😘

I'm not sure if the author is doing this on purpose, but the chapters jump around and there seems to be a disconnection... there isn't enough detail in the characters' story... so you understand events but not personality... why they react to certain attitudes or people's reaction... i feel that the author is just rushing through the chapters because they feel that they have to. But not much thought is going into them. The author seems to have an idea on the plot and who the characters will be. But for me, as a reader, i'm not feeling that connection. The world isn't developed enough and the feelings of the characters feel superficial .. i think this story has potential though.

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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😍😗😗😍😗😣😘😘🤔😗👄👄👄👄👄👄💋💋💋💘💘💘❤❤❤❤❤👅👄👄💘💘💔💕💕💗💗💕💕💔💖💖💖💝💜💞💞💞💟💖💖💗💗💕💕I love this novel so far......😚😚

Hahaha so far so good this book is getting better and I hope we can get more updates to come, and also thank you author for the amazing work.🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 keep up the good work and update more please

Like Mikey I Like it! Story has good premise. The writer is slowly building a world which has hooked me into wanting more! I will wait patiently to see how the story continues...

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Just reading the first chapter I can tell it will be a wonderful novel. I usually don’t like to do reviews from the chapter 1, let’s face it how would you know if u will like a story by reading the first chapter only. However, I made me interesting on this beginning is the person who betrayed her which I think is going to be an emotional battle to over come in my opinion. I can not wait until I am caught up so I can give a soiled review. However for now, I am excited 😊 to read this novel. Thank you author for sharing your story with us readers.

More chapters pleaseeeee 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Please update more chapters soon, we beg you OK Author? I love your story ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

I'm already started it hehe by the way I think it has kinda similarity to the other novel that I read yeah??? Although not the same names but the story maybe???? Haha anyways forget about it important is ilove your story author .. keep it going love yah😉😊😘😘

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