Tempted By My Boss

I would like to say that this story needs some constructive criticism, not because the story is bad, i do say the story is pretty good but the way you wrote it, was pretty bad. The layout of the story was weird and awkward. The punctuation and POV of the story was very off, the character development is not doing so good, the way you build up the whole story is pretty bad. There is no detail that is put in the story, no development on the story, characters, world building. I know (or so i think) the story only revolves, on the romance between the Main characters but the way the whole story was introduced was just poorly written. I dont think ill be reading the second volume but overall i wish you the best of luck👍🏻.

It was a beautiful story and every beautiful story has a villan that charlixe,clara & maggie...uuggghhhhh and I'm hoping second part comes fast pleasse tanz.v...love this book❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊

This is an extremely exciting book the first chapter had me wondering what else was going to happen. I love the way the aurthor climatic view point on the story has me excited to read more of this. book good work to the author!

It's quite of a nice unlike other stories which are extremely boring. This story is really interesting it doesnt even feel like it is exaggerated by the author

Chapters missing after 5. Don't know what the problem is. Can you fix it. I was reading and suddenly whatever I read is gone. Is it problem from my side or is it common?

you did a really good job you be appreciated for that ....... looking for your new novels eagerly.....love from india🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰and waiting for the sequel of this novel will hope a lot better than this one

An incomplete story, where an extremely poor Shojou harem manga meets Mills and Boon novels. When I started reading the story, I gave it some leeway for poor grammar, because English may not be author's first language so that's ok. But, the characterisation and plot development is just too bad. The plot has too many inconsistencies and you're left feeling- in which world is this possible !?! It felt as if both the main characters had a split personality, wherein, at times they'd behave like one person and other times like another...it's too confusing. It has almost all plots of a romantic novel, just thrown in the mix, where they suddenly just pop up from nowhere. Lastly, why I read the whole thing- I came here for smut and some lemony goodness BUT, I was disappointed...it's a poor lime at best. This is just what I think, read it and see if you agree with me or not... I just wasted my time.

Good start let pray it will go on smoothly and enticingly I'm looking frlorward toti sweet nothing's whispers and how hey will become couple just imagini g ...Tania shava goidluck it all we pray God less!!!!

I'm enjoying this book but pls release more chapters quickly abeg. Please mass release. MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE MASS RELEASE

I just love this book....it was like very easy going and I'm getting it in slowly and then to full... It was like a movie running in my head....and i loved the lovely care ... incidents...this is such a good story.... I'm waiting to read its second part....

Awesome story line with good writing quality with nice and interesting story background and nice characteristics of the main and side characters 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

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The story was very good. The flow of the story is nice. We won't feel bored anywhere. There were many twist and turns. Love and fight. Valerian character was lovable ....Usually girls like such man. And Hailey's character was brave and young. This is the story interested me a lot.