Gene Alexander was a genius feared by all. Cursed by the heroes of Earth as its greatest villain.
He never felt his genius was enough. After acquiring the knowledge of the twenty-four num galaxies, he sought to create an ultimate gaming system to allow him to evolve his body.
Becoming a being of both limitless genius and filled with the cosmic energies of the universe.
Unfortunately, he blew himself up.
The only thing I noticed is the whole shoving three different dialogue into one paragragh. You always start a new paragraph when starting a new dialogue.
This is a great novel for readers who love unique stories on an epic scale, filled with power and all things sci-fi! Recommended! /Dimisaurus
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It's quite an interesting fantasy book. I think you've got lots of ideas to keep the story flowing. The character names are also unique. I can't wait to read more chapters~
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