The Nightmare World
Sometimes it is the weak who end up strong.
Sometimes it is the strong that end up weak.
Sometimes it is the one who suffers that rises up,
Yet sometimes it is the one who is naive and free from suffering who rises up,
Jamaal, a teen who suffers from nightmares, has always been the weak, and yet, also the strong. In the day, he was strong, held strong, stood strong. Yet, when the night came, he became weak, suffering mentally from the darkness.
Yet, each time he woke up, he did not fall like his nightmare made it seem, he grew stronger, he accepted and reinforced his will.
The time now has come, though unexpected, Jamaal has to become stronger in the night and uncover secrets, journey across lands to help the people rise and fight against the darkness which destroyed the light of this continent and was now the ruler of Tanzania.
Please give power stones, I need them for the writing formula contest.
The flow was good, I didn't have difficulty continuing the chapters since it was very easy to read. The only thing I can say is that some parts seem rushed and the descriptions are often vivid. Still, your work is amazing. Keep writing!
Promising start. Some lacking punctuations in some parts, along with a few stilted sentences that doesn't seem to flow right IMO, but otherwise, a very well thought out story. I can see this going far, especially if you improve along the way. Keep on writing 👍
Really not that bad for a first chapter of a first book by the author. The constant skipping around wasn’t that great, but overall the quality is definitely present. :) -The Sleeping Tadpole
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This story is decent. That's what me, the author is saying. And I'm a very self-deprecating person. So basically, what I'm saying is that it is great, absolutely great, but in my eyes it's alright. Give me power stones. PLEASE
Oh my! I love the thrill of this book. Jamaal learning the system and how he is part of a RPG life. Him learning to train against a pug and the description is amazing! Just.. Wow
Great start, the writing is very descriptive so you can imagine the system. Pacing is a bit iffy since some parts are a bit rushed but overall, its interesting. Great start too!
This is officially the shortest book that i have had the time to read, but it is just as if not more enjoyable than any other. Here author take a big virtual pat on the back because you deserve it.
The author has really a great thought of writing. The story actually depicts the thought of weak to strong. The characters also belong to the story well. Great job author....keep writing. All the best for your further work..
A good read so far even though it only has 3 chapters currently. The starting chapter was interesting and the following two chapters was fun to read. Unfortunately, I couldn't continue reading it because there's only 3 chapters. Hoping that author will update regularly! 🤩😍😍
I shall be the typical shameless author and give my book 5 stars, well.. It is that good anyways- I just wanted to say that this book will be updated once every day, and I will continue doing this even after the competition ends, you can reply to this review if you wish to bring up anything with me, and uh, that's about it! And this book is great, read it, give power stones and be nice!