Deathrow Academy: A-Class Hybrids in Training
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For the past sixteen years of my life living as an orphan, thoughts of enrolling in a real school were all up in my mind. A dream to live on my own some day, apply for a decent job and visit the orphanage I grew up in, a better person. These thoughts, hopes and dreams, never once, did I think that one of them would come true.
Unfortunately for me, it didn't turn out that way, I hoped it would. If anything, it went south the moment it happened.
My life turned a complete one-eighty after suddenly getting enrolled in a school my supposed biological mother went to. Next thing I knew, I was pulled into a world where logic did not exist. A world of which I never could understand and.. I don't suppose I will understand.
Who knew creatures of unspeakable forms actually coexisted alongside humans. It’s crazy… to think, I was actually one of them…
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WARNING!!
This story will be under rewriting for the time being!! All characters and other relative aspects within this story is fiction and pure fiction only...
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I have a nice reading experience from this one. The plot is great, character designs are well detailed, and world building is fantastic! I like Levi's characteristic, being bold and frank and not afraid to do something reckless in an attempt to escape xD 1st chapter is a great start and got me hooked up in an instant. Well, just ignoring the typos and punctuation errors, all in all the story was beautifully-written. Keep it up ❤️
*sips sprite* this book is perfection( just a few punctuation errors, little to too many spaces, apart from that), perfection. A must-read. What are you still doing here! Add it to your library and read it.
This is a really good story. The plot is very interesting and unique and the author is good with words. The main character is relatable and well thought out. Keep up the good work!
It's a nice story I'm super duper proud Andrea here using my dad's account hi kc beh Ako to hahaha anyways im super duper proud of you and take care and always chin up okay haha
This book is very interesting, it sent shivers down my spine when I read the first few paragraphs, it is a book that will definitely become one of my favourites as time goes on, keep writing.😁
The writing is decent and the level of articulation is superb. One thing im worried is how the story is progressing too fast. Im not belittling it or anything but the plot is in the side of being cliche, unless you make up for it by using the plot development and world building. Nice read though!
Woh! I love this!! The plot’s great and I came here for the gory gore ;))))) more updates to come!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really have nothing much to say anymore but I hope you update more and fix some errors.
What impresses me is the character development, the author exposes us to Levi, the role character giving me something to look forward to. The overall story is filled with suspense. Good job, I would recommend this book.
I loved how you started this story - It's interesting and drags whoever reads it in. I also like how you go straight to the point. Keep up the good work!
I didn't know why but yeah I admit it I like your story design because you wrote it very well. It is a good story with fantasy theme in it, hmm it is also good how you describe the situation in the story.
don't know what I was thinking Leaving my child behind Now I suffer the curse Knowing now I am blind With all this anger, guilt and sadness Coming to haunt me forever I can't wait for the cliff at the end of the river Is this revenge I am seeking Or seeking someone to avenge me Stuck in my own paradox I wanna set myself free Maybe I should chase and find Before they'll try to stop it It won't be long before I'll become a puppet It's been so long Since I last have seen my son Lost to this monster To the man behind the slaughter Since you've been gone I've been singing this stupid song So I could ponder The sanity of your mother I wish I lived in the present With the gift of my past mistakes But the future keeps luring in like a pack of snakes Your sweet little eyes Your little smile, is all I remember Those fuzzy memories mess with my temper Justification is killing me But killing isn't justified What happened to my son, I'm terrified It lingers in my mind And the thought keeps on getting bigger I'm sorry my sweet baby I wish I've been there It's been so long Since I last have seen my son Lost to this monster To the man behind the slaughter Since you've been gone I've been singing this stupid song So I could ponder The sanity of your mother
I love your story! It's very engaging and well written. Though it didn't catch my eye, I can tell you put a lot of effort in it and it paid off. To me it was quite easy to predict what would happen in the next chapter, but perhaps it's because I've read a lot. Good job!