Life’s Pareto Equilibrium - Between the Choppy Waves & Serene Field.
Special dedication
“To the warriors of faith and survivor of the battle.
Salute to the fallen heroes who pave the way ahead.
You will be in our hearts forever.”
Synopsis
Growing up in a family where values and tradition runs deep, I often find the nature as my window of connection to the world outside where the waves and sea heals my sorrow, the stars and moon serve as my faithful companion to seek comfort and inspiration, the sun the life that never stop smiling to share my joy and the wind, my friend that never fail to whispers words of wisdom when I need it most in the quietness, the intuition that forms my beliefs when presented with cross roads in life.
Learning to manoeuvre the game of chess was never my cup of tea but I watch and learn only to play it when survival is at stake like how the olden days of ancient dynasty works. Matters of the heart never gets in the way, love to me is sacred in its nature until someone can unlock it permanently.
Between the choppy waves and vast serene field, can Ray find that space of comfort where he calls it Life's Pareto Equilibrium, balancing that with family values, fame and business stake - how can one strike a balance and win it all.
C1: Growing up
C2: The melody that fills the air
C3: Even when it hurts to play
C4: Home Sweet Home
C5: When you found me
C6: The dance that seal the past
C7: Sweet melody on an Afternoon Tea
C8: Learning the ropes and networking
C9: When the heart doesn’t feel well
C10: Entrepreneurship
C11: Agreements from before
C12: A silent deal
C13: Let not the heart waver
C14: When family support matters
C15: Running Away from Hurt
C16: Searching for an answer
C17: Lantern from thé heart - Mid Autumn Festival
C18: Afraid to Feel
C19: Keeping Focussed
C20: Love has no discrimination
C21: Willingly Yours
C22: Letting thé feelings run
C23: Forbidden Chapter
C24: Thé cold Aftermath
C25: Never Again
C26: Thé Red Rose and the White Peony
C27: Thé retreat and Isolation
C28: Drowned in sorrow
C29: Let me help you
C30: Stirring at the heart’s confusion
24.10.20
owemji north i just read the first chapter and you are getting better at writing compared to the other book. not that it isn't good. this book flows much better. i will be looking forward to the reading the rest of the story.
This is an interesting novel. The emotion pours out of the characters, and the descriptions are really poetic. My only concern is with the plot development, where I feel like it takes a while to see where the novel is going. The first chapter is a bit heavy on the information load, but apart from that, good job.
I genuinely really like this novel. The characters are really well written and the interactions between them is simply superb. It is rather rare when a novel can make you feel emotion alongside the characters but this one certainly succeeded on that front! Well done Author!
The narrative style is different but well written with clear ideas. The childhood nostalgia and the essence of family and values was well portrayed. The effects of loss and grief and the understanding and support from the family and friends were really heartwarming. But there are many instances of tense switches and missing punctuation marks. And I suggest breaking your paragraphs into smaller chunks which will make it easy to read and digest. All in all, a book with great potential. A bit of editing and polishing will definitely make it shine. All the best
The sypnosis are so detailed which makes the readers happy. The book displays the culture and the tradition which i love personally . so , i would totally read it.
This book is really superb. The author has weaved the synopsis really well. what I find fascinating in this book are: the culture was really shown. The tradition and values were also highlighted. The descriptions are vivid. Though I do not have much interest in orchestra, I could still imagine the music filling the air. Kudos to the author!
I got this as a recommendation from my friend, marichat_nettenoir. I read this book quite quickly and I loved it. Kudos to the author 🙏. [img=update]
I love this book! To the author, please post more chapters, this book is interesting, the plot flows quite nicely. [img=update][img=recommend]
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I can comprehend the story line, it’s never easy to lead a celebrity life. The emotions felt real, I know to a certain extend it is. Thank for shedding light to this story. The struggle to love beyond the norm it’s never easy it the eyes of others. Thank you for sharing your story with us anonymously.
I really like this novel, not only is the sypnosis really clear for readers the plot of the story is interesting too, Good luck to the author, I wish you the best of luck
I loved the way author wrote this story especially the narrative style of the characters and their interactions. I haven't read a story which describes culture and traditions, it is evident that author has done a really good job. The writing quality,the plot build up everything about this story is awesome. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work author.