Bounty trail

This book is great and all, but the grammar is very frustrating to me. If you could somehow fix that, then I would be really happy. Other than the grammar everything is great, especially the character Erin.

This is a very interesting and detailed book about a team of people and their adventures they have on their journey. Its a cool story with a few comedic stuff in it. Overall its really great, but the grammar isn't to good. Other than the grammar, its great!

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its a really good book so far i like the story line and i could go hours reading this! keep making chapters!! even another book if you have to! i wanna see what happens next!

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this is a bad [in a good way] story with bad characters like do more pls do more......................................................................................