Elena has a normal life. Normal family and normal friends, but things started to change when she met a weird guy who kept calling her boss.
How will she live her life if the life she thought she had was all a lie? Will she continue being herself or change to face reality?
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Author's note:
Thank you for trying this story...
All part of this story.
The character's name and profile, the place and happenings, place content that is the same as the others are just coincident.
This is a fictional story.
Expect some wrong grammar, anecdotes, brutality, foul words from the characters.
Read for your own risk.
Now ladies and Gentlemen...
Please sit back, read, and enjoy...
Nice! The narrative is an interesting and action-packed one. The characters are well rounded. The grammar is on point too. Kudos to the author.
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Great story. Starts off high in action. Author has a great writing style and way of building the suspense of the action. MC seems pretty mysterious as well.
Thrilling and action packed. Very entertaining for those people who wants to have some spice on their boring romance reading life. 😅 kudos writer. Keep it up.. 👍
I love how you designed the characters. Most of the time our lives change but if we don't take control life ends up changing us sometimes even to all sorts of worst kinds. You got everything well portrayed. Keep it up!
Sounds interesting and kinda hooked me, not enough though to gloss over the grammatical mistakes. I'll probably be back once the story has been proofread. A grammar check would really help. besides that it sounds pretty interesting. I'm just a stickler for spelling/grammatical correctness in the stuff I read. Even if my own English is flawed, not my first language. Should the grammar improve dramatically in the later chapters, please let me know so I can continue reading!
Well, I will give 5 stars to the author... I like how she made the world itself, and how fun the character is... The identity of Elena and her past, and the situation. The feeling that I thought I already know what will happen next but then it is different. The mystery, makes you want to dwell more, and the unexpected truth in volume one, and the twist. Truly amazing. Although there are some grammar and some spelling that needs to fix, nevertheless it affects the story... All in all, I love it. Ben fatto!
This story is well written. I haven't read something so good for a while. The storyline develops well throughout and the picture created is fascinating. Overall this is a great book.
Honestly never knew that I could be so invested in a book before. It is so amazingly structured and I love the way that the author writes! Highly recommended.
I love, love, love this book. It starts with a bang, grabs the reader by the throat and never lets up. A captivating, action-filled novel, I cant wait for more chapters!!!!
The plot is very very grippy and I enjoyed most of it. I would also advise you to run a grammar check before publishing it and that would just add to the look of it. I love how you designed your world and the detail in some aspects is almost like it's in front of us. Overall, solid job! 👍🏼
some punctuation mistakes and some grammar mistakes I noticed are not that big of an impact to the story nonetheless, this book is good, great. Very detailed in words, character design and world background. Thoughx updating stability can be improved
very refreshing to the eyes and ears. kudos to the Author for dropping such a mouth watering masterpiece. I have been looking for something not too over the edge and not boring either and this work of art delivers just the right amount. [img=recommend]
I just started reading this book and it’s now my number1 favorite. Wow 🤩, The story is so cool and very descriptive. I recommend this book. Keep it up author 💪💪💪