Tell No One

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Author: Kay Lillyt
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It’s not what you think.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_Aniv

Wow! 😮 This is good! I must say I am impressed! The scenes were portrayed with a showing not telling style. A story that catches your emotions and a roller coaster at that. Mc was someone you wanted to root for. Loved it ❤️ [img=recommend]

3 years ago
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ARnab
ARnab

Ooh man, I loved Lacey's character, it was so so intriguing and fantastically well written with a great use of some awesome dialogues and monologues. I didn't read much but they flow of the story is great that just takes you on an unstoppable journey. A little sad to see it's already over but hopefully I will get to read more of the author's works in the future. And yup, the paragraphs, they are a little bit too extended, so a little more spacing would be better.

3 years ago
3
lakeslate
lakeslate

I loved this book, found it after it was completed… great writing and great characters, I would still love to know what happened over the last summer L&T🥰❤️💖💋. I am now reading ”if and Maybe”. Thank you for both books✍🏼✍🏼✍🏼is great

2 years ago
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LordShivaStories
LordShivaStories

Loved Lacey/Mc. Awesome story with perfect pacing. If I had to give it a name I would say it was a hidden gem. I don't usually read fmc stories but I absolutely loved the book

a year ago
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slowestcook
slowestcook

Read it all, loved it! Such a hidden gem. 💎All I can say is that the synopsis gives you nothing… and everything— it’s not what you think! I don’t want to say much because you really are best going in blind. The synopsis and title are spot on… though the current cover art just contributed to the synopsis. Haha. Fabulous characters and dialogue. Love the interactions between characters. This book does not hold your hand. If you don’t understand something, there’s either a reason or you are expected to figure it out yourself. The writing is a little difficult at times for two reasons: first, there are often scene changes without any warning or indication, so you sometimes realize a few lines later that it’s a completely different scene. Second, you sometimes have to follow closely to keep track of which character is speaking. But don’t be detoured, absolutely worth it! And the content is really good. (Also, super lengthy chapters, so great value if you want to use FPs.) I’m adding the author’s other books to my library. Can’t wait! Thank you!

2 years ago
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Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117

The story development is great, the grammar is decent, the description is impressive, and the world background is respectable. Cheers to the author, it's a good read.

3 years ago
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Boani
Boani

I'll definitely give a 10.0 review if it were an option. The story is superb. I admire Lacey's personality. The plot is well constructed. The conspiracy is.... check it out yourself hihi.

3 years ago
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AxlSLL
AxlSLL

I like this story. It doesn't fear jumping into the action and creating chaotic and intriguing situations that come very well into this genre. The MC is interesting and when she talks, it's because she's got something interesting to say. You could try to split the big paragraphs into smaller ones for easier readier digestion, but I see no other problems with this story. Good job!

3 years ago
1
Darkanzel
Darkanzel

I have read the first few chapters and let me say it's just amazing... the book is so intriguing and and we'll written and the characters are also well described. Highly recommended!

3 years ago
1
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_Rue

Love the characters the chapters are great, the incredible work you have inscribed this is just wonderful Author well done 🌟Readers should go theough this book I'm sure they wouldn't want to miss a chapter.

3 years ago
1
Ethel_Imaginations
Ethel_Imaginations

10 chaps in and here is my review. Beautiful. Really love the way it's written. (A few paragraph spacing and grammar correction would have been nice but it is on the lesser area so doesn't break the flow of reading) The pacing is perfect, not too fast but not slow enough to bore you, really done well.

3 years ago
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Mask01
Mask01

Nice!

3 years ago
1
KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1

Lacey Atkins leaves school for a year and comes back wanting nothing more that to be left alone. Alone in a class room, Tom Wade sees Lacey and soon comes to want nothing more than to be with her. Her weird and unusual ways all make him the more curious and drawn in.

3 years ago
1
Violet_167
Violet_167

It's an interesting story. Upon first look, the summary is very short so it doesn't spoil anything about what we're about to read. I'm still stuck on that friend in the beginning because I 10/10 wouldn't have forgiven her right then. Cheers to your story author!

3 years ago
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MPTheUnknownWriter
MPTheUnknownWriter

This is a really good story! I like the creativity behind it and the love between family. The protective brother and baby sister really touched my heart. To be honest, not everybody has that kind of bond with their family, so they would read what it's like and the experience behind it, and you showed it well. You brought the feelings and emotions out in this story. I give you all five stars. Your creative mind was able to come up with these emotions in whatever way you did it. Good job! You are going to be amazing in the future. Much love from your girl M.P The Unknown Writer!

3 years ago
1