The outcast

This is a great start; I see lots of potential here. I like how you make use of dialogue, I myself find it difficult so I always avoid adopting them in my work. I look forward to reading many more chapters. Keep it up!

Wow.i must say I'm impressed.The plot and character are interesting.The first chapter got me in and I am so addicted.i always come back here hoping to see chapter 6.please post soon.i highly recommend this book.kudos author Tobi. Big fan here.i love you 😍

This is the best. Love the fact that the main character is a Nigerian.Your writing skills is so unique and perfect.Good work author.keep it up

Interesting story so far. Its just the start n the novel is gonna go really good. I want to know more about Michelle. Wish u luck.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Okay, I will say this is a great story, not because it's one of my Nigerian people that wrote it, but because it is a great story. i don't really see many Nigerian stories here but this got me impressed. Alex was mean to Michelle but I hope he gets better. Keep it up Author, looking forward to more chapters

An okay read. Enjoyable and really imaginative. The author did a good job with the synopsis and plot development. He brought the book to life.

This novel has an engaging plot and the execution has fluidity that propels to the next scene quite easily. In other words, it's easy to get hooked and go on reading. Keep on writing, author. All the best.

"The Outcast" started off with a nice, & unique story. I liked all five chapters. Looking forward to reading more chapters. The writing style is well written. I'm in love with Michelle and Alex. I hope they become a power couple and have a happily ever after. I'm connected with Michelle from the starting of the chapter. I and she have a lot in common. I am proud to say that I survived as a bully victim. Highly recommended for reading. Keep it up, author!

it is a very interesting story. I can't wait to read more and see what will Michelle's life be in America. The Author did a great job in thinking of a captivating storyline! Looking forward for more, Author!

this is an interesting story, well formed and arranged😊😊 the plot is amazing the choice of of words is superb can't wait to for the next chapter to be uploaded

Author's note. This is my first book please support. This book is all about true friendship, betrayal, true love and a little bit of adventure. Thank you for reading.....

The story struck me.. This is close to reality. The choice of words are nicely written as well as the characters.. I'm sure that the author will justified both culture difference and the reality of the situation... Keep it up author...

The best... Supporting you all the way sis. Mitchelle is someone most Africans abroad can relate with.. And your story line is daebak.. Kudos.. Looking forward to reading this book to the end

i like it. it's so relatable and honest. the way it talks about things we don't otherwise talk about. Slso the main character is strong, i like that as well. great use of words, wonderful book, keep up the good work!