The Story Never Ends

Hello guys I am the author of this book. If you are tired of seeing bullied, dark past, sister relationship, family problems and the same cliché stories. Then this novel is for you all.

I have read 30 chapters and I like it until now. Some things are a bit strange, like learning a language in three days or reading an entire library in five days. good luck mr. author

For the author first novel, honestly it boring. There are too many plot holes and cliches. Mc is a retard and cringey to read. The plot is pretty much generic and predictable.

Keep going . I am only on my first chapter but i can feel the writer's imagination . I hope it gets better and better . Will tell people about this novel. All the best

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Claims to be a system novel but doesn’t show the system, the whole point of a system is a visual representation of the MC’s growth without that it just looks like the MC is delusional.

Cultivation Novel, but not from China. People be like: B-b-bakana!!! Then Chinese People be like: You're courting death! And lastly Chinese government be like: I will find you and I will you! Just saying lol😁🤣😂

Not bad. Not great. It aint trash but its not something great that you will have the urge to binge read it all in one go. Overall a generic novel. Could have been better. But atleast its not something horrible.

The story is generic, and the characters are made from cardboard. The MC also seems slow. The "Golden finger" - the System, is almost superfluous, and its exact use is blurred. The grammar is okayish, even with the few errors here and there, but all characters' names are Western. It's strange and breaks immersion to have these kinds of names in an Eastern novel. It might be worth reading for some people, but there are heaps of better stories in the same genre.

Its a really good novel, the grammar and sentance structure have minor errors but nothing huge or immersion breaking. I only have two complaints. One is the lack of a system interface as of chapter 45, a example of how this interface could look like is below. Name: XXXX Level: XX Percentage to next level: XX% Technique: Ulimate XX Sword Skill Rank: Novice (+) And so on. The other compliant is how later on there is more inspiration taken from Way of the Devil than I would have liked but the early stuff is very original such as the different types of phyiques and sects. Overall this book deservea a solid 4.4-4.6 stars and the author should be very proud of all the hard work and they have put in to give readers like me such a good novel. Recommended, especially if you have never read Way of the Devil.

hope the locked chapters can be read in other sites . Cant afford to pay for the chapters cause its alot from where im from. Thanks for the reading experience though.

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I would have given it more stars but this story just gives so much Deja Vu that I might puke. It is Pure cliché. Like what can even do about it .